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Reviews for The Toil of the Just

Bree2016.04.17 - 12:33PM2: HalloweenSigned
It's dark and very hypnotic... Nothing I've quite read before. I'm very interested to see SS/HG relationship unfold. I can imagine Snape being this dark. I like it.

Author's Response: Thank you. The relationship will unfold only if she chooses to use her dark power to save him. Not an easy choice, I'd say.

Bree2016.04.17 - 12:10PM2: HalloweenSigned
It's dark and very hypnotic... Nothing I've quite read before. I'm very interested to see SS/HG relationship unfold. I can imagine Snape being this dark. I like it.

Author's Response: Thanks! Actually, I can't really imagine Snape being much "lighter", at least not before VDM was defeated... I've made him extremely powerful and versed in dark magic (Kissing a Dementor, come on!), and I do hope readers will like this take

verasuspense2016.04.08 - 01:43AM2: HalloweenSigned
" A Dementor Kissed Snape - and IT died! "

Author's Response: Snape's the kissy type, after all. Who would have guessed ? ;-) And think of kissing him, afterwards. Whew!

loreen772016.01.28 - 11:01PM2: HalloweenSigned
Ah Florida, gators and crocks both. Sure a safe place. I loved the wild idea of destroying the dementor by kissing it back. Crazy and creepy as hell. This is so dark, but really interesting. I am definitely interesting in seeing the rest.

Author's Response: Thank you. Will post soon i hope. Kissing back a Dementor means you're blacker than it, though.

verasuspense2016.01.26 - 12:54PM2: HalloweenSigned
"Aside from watching muggle tv..." I was going to ask how one watches tv in a cave, but then you said they were in a pub. Muggle pubs have tvs, but do Wizarding ones ? Why was everybody so outraged at the notion of 6th yers being apparated to America BEFORE they found out about the swamp full of magic alligators ? If they were crocodiles, they would have to have been imported especially for the occasion.

Author's Response: 1.They all have their private hideouts. Besides how hard can it be for a wizard to hook atv set? 2. If the Carrows send unattended kids abroad it's bad news, and yes there is supposed to be some back story here. 3. South Florida shelters two different breeds of crocs,on top of the alligators...http://www.nps.gov/ever/learn/nature/crocodile.htm. now for the magic kind i can't vouch... Thanks for your attention to detail, and for reviewing. It's nice to see somebody cares...




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