Reviews for The Toil of the Just
My Witch | 2016.12.05 - 11:23PM | 1: In the Cave | Signed |
Oh my lord, I loved this story, and this Snape SO MUCH. Everyone, in fact, is just bitingly hard core (whoa! even Cho!), so determined, and so smart about it. I loved Hermione's voice - she's clearly gone through a lot, as have they all. You've made the situation of the war so much more realisitc than I've seen it done in other fics - it's f*cking WAR here and I admire that you've pulled no punches. Snape was utterly fascinating, so dark, so dangerous, so courageous. (And really, how could he not be? with the life he's led?) Just wanted to tell you that this is marvelous, and if you ever write a sequel, I will be first in line to read it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Thank you so much! I've stopped getting review notices from Ash so sorry for the delay in responding. You're so right...how could he not be? with the life he's led?
I do have a sequel naggling at my mind... just have to find the guts to write it.
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fifiotoole | 2016.04.13 - 05:41PM | 1: In the Cave | Signed |
Very powerful story.
Author's Response: Thanks. Those issues imo quite imposed themselves from cannon. |
Desert_Sea | 2016.03.02 - 03:25AM | 1: In the Cave | Signed |
Beautifully written and intriguing take on Snape's character.
Author's Response: Thanks. Actually, I do believe this would be the "real" Snape, not watered down for a YA public... But it's only me... |
NoorInaya | 2016.01.31 - 10:47PM | 1: In the Cave | Signed |
I can't finish it. Sorry, but you wrote as though you absolutely hate Severus Snape, and can find no good in him at all. Not one redeeming quality.
Too dark, too disturbing, too much.
Author's Response: You put me in a quandary here... should I give you spoilers?
Well. This was written for the "Deeply Horrible" fest, and the subtitle was, "celebrating S. Snape (so, no hate here), in all his flawed glory." Maybe you should only read the next chapter, in which he explains himself quite a lot. But this is no toned-down ,YA version of a spy .
Thanks for your review.
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fifiotoole | 2016.01.30 - 06:08PM | 1: In the Cave | Signed |
Great writing. Love your other story too. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Hope you'll go on reviewing, too... |
Jong_Kahn | 2016.01.22 - 01:51PM | 1: In the Cave | Signed |
Great start---only now I'm wary, because you've slipped that it'll be going "...nowhere good, I'm afraid." Rats. I'll still keep reading, but don't think I've got as much to look forward to.
Author's Response: Hi Jong Kahn, NICE to read you again! Thanks for the R&R. Now...I remember you don't like dark too much. This is ... Think 95%bitter chocolate.dark. I've received such wonderful reviews for it it has a warm place in my heart, but...Rats. It's dark. Hope you'll be in it for the ride...and also because I am working on a sequel with more ...milk. Thanks |
loreen77 | 2016.01.20 - 11:00PM | 1: In the Cave | Signed |
Very interesting start. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Author's Response: It goes nowhere good, I'm afraid. Will you please still stay for the ride ?
Thanks for your review... |
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