I just don't find the character interactions very plausible. Sorry. I tried.
And what of Harry and Draco getting married? To whom? To each other?
I don't get why people want to make them gay and in love with each other.
I'm not sure what you mean by "Hermione relented and settled back into the chair and made a minimum of two attempts to run out of the house to cry for several weeks." Did something get left out, because as it stands, it doesn't make sense.