Reviews for A Cold Kiss
Jong_Kahn | 2016.01.11 - 01:27AM | 1: A Cold Kiss | Signed |
Cute, although I didn't exactly understand "...congratulated himself on making his new gig a great deal more bearable now that those two were happily distracted." Distracted from what? And why would that make his 'new gig' working at Hogwarts "more bearable"? One didn't get the feeling that this was prepared for. As a surprise, it didn't follow logically. Not trying to be a spoilsport, it just seemed like it had been thrown in from nowhere, out of left field.
Author's Response: LOL not a spoil sport at all! I meant to imply in the beginning of the story that Hermione and Severus had somewhat teamed up against Ron rather than poking at each other, so he set them up to give himself a bit of peace. (He is a rather strategically-minded fellow, after all, and I really like that about him) Sorry if it wasn't more clear!! |
Vessnape | 2016.01.10 - 07:19AM | 1: A Cold Kiss | Signed |
Very nice, please keep writing
Author's Response: Thank you! I intend to keep writing as long as the muse lets me! :) |
satigirl | 2016.01.07 - 07:59PM | 1: A Cold Kiss | Signed |
Loved it. Thank you sharing
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! ♥ |
slpkfast | 2016.01.06 - 06:18PM | 1: A Cold Kiss | Signed |
What a perfect story. The build up to "the moment" seemed perfectly in-character, and the actual kiss was nice and steamy. I'll be keeping an eye out for a follow-up! Thanks for sharing your story.
Author's Response: Heehee, thank you!! ♥ |
raj | 2016.01.06 - 08:16AM | 1: A Cold Kiss | Signed |
Hee, that's terrific! Lovely story!
Author's Response: Thanks! |
Eszther | 2016.01.06 - 07:11AM | 1: A Cold Kiss | Signed |
Oh yes, well done! I will remember your story during my afternoon walk to keep me warm. Thank you!
Author's Response: Heehee, you're welcome, I know it's been ages but I hope you had a lovely walk :) |
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