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rivrav2015.12.24 - 12:03AM13: 13. A Most Inopportune TimeSigned
Still coming along strong! Keep it up :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm still updating as often as possible!

verasuspense2015.12.21 - 08:21PM12: 12. No RegretsSigned
"The only time he wasn't sarcastic was when his mouth was shut." is a great line ! Having Severus teach Hermione Occlumency and then she teach it to Harry is what they should have done in the first place. Dumbledore was not a stupid man ( or so we were told) and he knew Harry and Severus detest one another, so expecting Harry to learn from him was unrealistic, to say the least. I have always suspected that Harry's failure was part of AD's plan all along; he could say that he tried his best to help Harry and it wasn't his fault it didn't work out. Meanwhile, of course, Harry had no protection against Voldie. "Ron had taken to making cruel verbal jabs at Hermione". What else is new ? He started doing that on board the Hogwarts Express in the first book. I never understood why she considered the abusive jerk a friend.

Author's Response: Thanks, I was very happy with that line myself ;-)

verasuspense2015.12.21 - 08:21PM12: 12. No RegretsSigned
"The only time he wasn't sarcastic was when his mouth was shut." is a great line ! Having Severus teach Hermione Occlumency and then she teach it to Harry is what they should have done in the first place. Dumbledore was not a stupid man ( or so we were told) and he knew Harry and Severus detest one another, so expecting Harry to learn from him was unrealistic, to say the least. I have always suspected that Harry's failure was part of AD's plan all along; he could say that he tried his best to help Harry and it wasn't his fault it didn't work out. Meanwhile, of course, Harry had no protection against Voldie. "Ron had taken to making cruel verbal jabs at Hermione". What else is new ? He started doing that on board the Hogwarts Express in the first book. I never understood why she considered the abusive jerk a friend.

Author's Response: I've always thought that even though a lot of it was either written to be funny or to show that Ron liked Hermione for years and was acting out of jealousy... that he was a whiny, immature, and selfish, and even if he sort of grew out of some of it by the last book it was not enough to make me like him. I think Hermione stuck with him because he accepted her as a friend along with Harry at a time when she was friendless and awkward and she's a loyal person. He was popular enough, at least in Gryffindor house, to make being his friend worthwhile and offer her some protection from being the weird, loner Muggleborn know-it-all.

Loyd19572015.12.20 - 11:24AM11: 11. Four Funerals and a WeddingSigned
Well, this is quite a little tasty tidbit of a story. I find Severus really holding back tremendously or he actually does not yet feel anything for the little Gryfindor. What will the final act be that makes him realize his true feelings, or is this a story of one sided infactuation? Can't wait to see.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it! More on what's going on in Severus' head soon to come. :-)

middayling2015.12.18 - 01:05PM11: 11. Four Funerals and a WeddingSigned
I absolutely love your writing, the end of this chapter was brilliant! Looking forward to the next one :)

Author's Response: Thanks! The next should be up soon!

Awapuhi2015.12.18 - 07:59AM11: 11. Four Funerals and a WeddingSigned
It seems he doesn't know yet what he wants ... By the way - how many chapters does this story consist of? :)

Author's Response: It is 20 chapters long ;-)"

Shananara2015.12.18 - 02:19AM11: 11. Four Funerals and a WeddingSigned
Great chapter! I love your development of the characters and the views into their thoughts and feelings! Craving for more!!! Would be interesting to see Ron and Harry's reaction to changed Hermione..

Author's Response: Thanks! I will have more up soon, upon which we will return to Hermione's POV and the boys.

loreen772015.12.14 - 04:08PM9: 9. Communication is the KeySigned
I love the idea of AD's mini portrait relaying additional information to them. Very creative!

Author's Response: :-)

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