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Reviews for Things That Go Bump in the Night

Jamichka2015.08.23 - 01:45AM1: Chapter 1Signed
This was hilarious! I gasped out loud. :D Very entertaining!

Villainshavemorefun2015.07.29 - 01:56AM1: Chapter 1Signed
I really wasn't expecting that twist, and though I'm slightly nauseated at the impeccable imagery, I'm actually laughing out loud. Excellent!

Leraiv Snape2015.07.22 - 01:02AM1: Chapter 1Signed
That was hilarious. Well done, good twist at the end!

loreen772015.07.20 - 10:15PM1: Chapter 1Signed
Even insightful Ron has dumb crazy ideas. Very funny!

vze57t9j2015.07.18 - 01:52AM1: Chapter 1Signed
Fantastic story!!! I could almost see the look on everyone's face, priceless! I've been giggling all morning. :D

bluemooonie2015.07.16 - 03:08PM1: Chapter 1Signed
Oh my gosh, giggling as I'm reading it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Jong_Kahn2015.07.16 - 01:38PM1: Chapter 1Signed
Cute story! Just one small thing to correct, in the next-to-last section. The last word in the last sentence should not be "laid", since it's not past tense, but "lay". As in "That way madness...lay." Even with a compound subject (madness AND the stay at St.Mungo's), the proper tense would still be "lay". Otherwise the story is perfect...except for Ronald having that bad idea, of course!

Author's Response: Thanks very much for pointing that out, fixed now!




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