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| Mikimoto | 2014.11.10 - 10:29AM | 1: One shot | Signed |
| So well done. Your prose is very evocative. It set the mood well and drew the observer in. Thank you. Author's Response: Hello and thank you for reviewing! It was a very hard time for young Severus - I wanted to portray that along with his resilience and resourcefulness. Sorry I took so long to respond... The Great Ash Crash has had me circling the site apprehensively for some while now :oP | |||
| foosball | 2014.11.08 - 08:26PM | 1: One shot | Signed |
| Really well done! Tugs on the heart strings! Author's Response: Thanks foosball, glad you enjoyed it :o) | |||
| loreen77 | 2014.11.07 - 09:45PM | 1: One shot | Signed |
| Wonderful job. Love the look at his childhood and the idea of chocolate! Author's Response: Thank you! We don't see much of his childhood in the books, just enough to know that it was pretty bleak. And no-one to give him chocolate and tell him not to wipe his hands on his trousers! | |||
| Amr | 2014.11.07 - 07:23AM | 1: One shot | Signed |
| What a wonderfully drawn snippet of Severus's boyhood--you've really made me see the gritty environment along his twisted path through the neighborhood. And his endless suspicion and superb skills as a spy are clearly rooted in his ability to navigate this environment. And then after all the hunger and bad memories, a book about food with a happy ending. And then you give us the boy's real-life happy ending, complete with chocolate. Lovely. Author's Response: Hi Amr! Thanks very much - quite a streetwise little urchin, wasn't he? The happy ending took longer to manifest for him, with a walk or two through hell along the way, but it looks like he might think it was worth the wait. He's a big boy now, so he can eat as much chocolate as he wants, whenever he feels like it ;o) | |||
| Fizzabella | 2014.11.07 - 12:12AM | 1: One shot | Signed |
| Poignant and sweet. What a lovely story! Author's Response: Thank you :o) | |||
| paddiew | 2014.11.06 - 09:25PM | 1: One shot | Signed |
| Ahhh..."bittersweet" chocolate. Lovely story. Thank you Author's Response: Chocolate makes lots of things better :o) | |||
| MeliJ | 2014.11.06 - 09:13PM | 1: One shot | Signed |
| This was so cute! It was nice to see his experience as a boy :) Author's Response: Thanks MeliJ - it wasn't much of a boyhood but it made him very tough and tenacious. | |||
| articcat621 | 2014.11.06 - 08:43PM | 1: One shot | Signed |
| This was really sweet! I love Charlie and the Chocolate Factory so this just tugged on all my heartstrings! Lovely job! xx Author's Response: Thank you! | |||
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