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Reviews for Angelica's Sorrow

sandpiper2023.03.31 - 08:54AM33: Chapter Thirty-ThreeSigned
why is it that so many authors choose to present Harry as childish and egoistical despite the evidence from the books and present Hermione as very mature at her ripe age of 18, again despite the evidence from the books? It's not that she is childish or stupid, but her declaring herself mature because she's 18 sounds just as funny as an 8yo saying something about 'when I was little'. There is no need to change the characters that much to make them interesting, it only makes them onedimentional. The beginning of the story was quite realistic character-wise, but not the way it's developing since the moment Severus asked Hermione to be his apprentice, and now this...

kudlatek2017.09.30 - 03:01AM38: EpilogueSigned
Interesting and with something completely new. You had here many great ideas and for that - I thank you. It was a pleasure to read it. Thank you for the amazing reading!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much for taking the time to review. It's nice to know that someone is enjoying her story after all this time.

PaigeNoelle2017.04.20 - 05:40PM17: Chapter SeventeenSigned
I love how he loves his legs! Ha! You definitely got a laugh out of me! He'd better let Narcissa down soon. I enjoy her character in this story though, so I hope she finds someone worth her while.

Author's Response: Thank you! It's been so long since I wrote this story that I had forgotten the bit with his legs.

ASchaffalit2015.02.24 - 03:34PM4: Chapter FourSigned
Such beautiful scenes of caring nature - the sun being as gentle as possible, the wind, rain at night. If only i could write as well as you did in your first fic ! There is a reason people say writers have special talents. So, just, Thank you. Salazar's pensieve, eh? Just what our Potions master needs, to immerse himself in a gritty problem , thoughts , heart, soul and body. AD. does have difficulty in respecting ''private.'' Omniscience with ethics, please.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much for taking the time to leave me a review. I'm very fond of Angelica, since it was my first story, and even though there are parts of it I would love to rewrite, I'm leaving her as she stands. Again, thank you so much for your kind words.

marisamarinee2014.08.10 - 01:47PM2: Chapter TwoSigned
Hmm so Ron's dead and Lily still haunts him?

Author's Response: No, no Lily in this story. It was written many, many years before we knew about his love for Lily. Ron is indeed dead.

marisamarinee2014.08.10 - 01:43PM1: Chapter OneSigned
I wonder who the three are? Hermione for sure I think

Author's Response: Hermione is one yes. ;)

loreen772014.07.16 - 09:15AM38: EpilogueSigned
Wonderful job. Very emotional ending. Your poem was so very touching. I am sorry you had to go through such a profound loss. Thank you for sharing something so close to your heart.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much for all your kind reviews. I'm quite fond of Angelica, because she was the first one I'd ever written. It was a very tough time, and even though it's been 10 years since we lost him, I still think of Donnie (my brother) a lot.

loreen772014.07.14 - 05:44PM15: Chapter FifteenSigned
While he might be a good match for this Narcissa and I really like her....alas he needs to chase whom he loves(hermione) and not settle.

Author's Response: We are in total agreement! ;)

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