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DragonIris2020.11.21 - 02:11PM1: One chapterSigned
Very cute but a tad confusing. He definitely wanted her and she obviously wanted him, so why did she need to let him dose her on love potions? It would have made more sense for her to just tell him she had always known he was trying to dose her so she took something to neutralize the potion because it was unnecessary. I hope she would also tell him slipping her a potion — especially one that would take away her free will — no matter how well intentioned, was not acceptable and not to be repeated.

DistinctVagueness2019.12.01 - 10:07PM1: One chapterSigned
Oh dear, that ending! It raises some questions! They certainly wasted too many years. Hopefully this time they'll get it right and there'll be no more love potions! Nice little drabble, thank you. -DV

Jenniemay2014.08.31 - 08:35PM1: One chapterSigned
so- even though she loved him all along she still had to let him drug her so hed believe in her love for him?

Author's Response: Hi Jenniemay, Yes I think you're right - they both had feelings for one another over the years but couldn't trust those feelings, which led to the potions stand-off. Thank you so much for the review of my first attempt at a drabble-type story.

loreen772014.08.15 - 04:29PM1: One chapterSigned
cute, nice job.

Author's Response: You're welcome! Thank you very much for troubling to review this.

Werbsister2014.08.14 - 08:37PM1: One chapterSigned
The ending made me truly lol!

Author's Response: Brilliant - thank you. It's very kind of you to leave a review. Who knows, I may have a go at more drabbles- so hope I can make you laugh again :-)

whynot22014.08.14 - 05:23PM1: One chapterSigned
I don't usually read drabbles but this was so nice. I shall check out your longer stories

Author's Response: Hello and thank you very much. This was my very first drabble so I'm glad you liked it and I'd be very grateful if you go on to read some of my longer stories (both still very much works in progress). Thank you again!

Loyd19572014.08.14 - 04:13PM1: One chapterSigned
Ah, humorous in a way, but sad that it took many, many years to get the gumption to do anything.

Author's Response: Hello Loyd 1957 - you are spot on. You can laugh at them but it's also pretty sad that they didn't get together sooner and without the help of potions. Thank you for reading this and leaving a review.

Littlebigmouth2014.08.14 - 01:25PM1: One chapterSigned
I don't think Severus needed the love potion or Hermione needed the anti- love potion potion. I think they'll be just fine after they stop doubting and start relaxing and enjoying each other.

Author's Response: Thank you for the very first review of my very first drabble. Even though it took so long for them to get together, maybe now they will relax and enjoy a romance. It would be nice to think they both got a happy ending.

Author's Response: Thank you for the very first review of my very first drabble. Even though it took so long for them to get together, maybe now they will relax and enjoy a romance. It would be nice to think they both got a happy ending.

Author's Response: Thank you for the very first review of my very first drabble. Even though it took so long for them to get together, maybe now they will relax and enjoy a romance. It would be nice to think they both got a happy ending.




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