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Reviews for Burn Down The Mission

Jane3332014.08.25 - 01:28PM3: ThreeSigned
This is great, what an interesting concept! Also, you write beautifully! Especially love how you described Severus's hypnotic voice.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Hananian2014.08.24 - 04:07PM6: SixSigned
Thoroughly enjoyed this story. And major kudos to you. I've never been able to end any of my stories any way except happily. The fact that you listened to you Muse and stayed true to the story (knowing it might upset people) makes me like the story even more. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am truly humbled at the level of understanding and acceptance I've had here on Ash regarding this story. Bless you a million times.

reverseuniverse2014.08.24 - 03:07PM6: SixSigned
I usually avoid unhappy endings in stories. I would say that there's far too much angst and unhappiness in the real world to let it also take a portion of my "me" time. However, in this case, I'm glad I didn't. It is written beautifully. Your skill in representing both characters makes up for any sadness I feel over these two characters never being able to be on the same plane of existence.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate that your time is precious, and that you don't want to spend it unhappily. And I thank you for understanding what I was trying to do in the story, and that for you, though the ending wasn't the classic happily ever after, you were able to like it regardless. Thank you for your uplifting comments. I appreciate them more than I can say.

deatheaterbride2014.08.24 - 09:09AM6: SixSigned
Nobody writes Snape better than you. Not even JKR. I love that even in all his flawed and selfish glory you never leave him bleeding on the shack floor and we love you for it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much - what a stunning compliment! Thank you!

Bongyorka03062014.08.23 - 11:43AM6: SixSigned
It was a really heartbreaking story, but I could "feel it in the air" when I read the previous chapters, that something bad is going to happen. I think that Snape wasn't cruel or bad, simply just human, and I think that anyone would want to escape anyway they can, but maybe Hermione. She would sacrifice herself for a loved one. Hogwarts knew this, that's why it knew that Severus would be the next Headmaster. (At least I interpret it like this :D). Thank you for this wonderful and interesting story, and thank you for choosing the sad ending!

Author's Response: Thank you. I have to say, so many readers have totally misinterpreted what I wanted this story to be, but you have seen EVERYTHING I wanted to convey in this story. Thank you for this. I am thrilled. You interpreted it perfectly, right down to the fact that a person trapped inside a barren desert of a prison for 30 years would be willing to do almost anything, including allowing the woman he loved, to do whatever rash thing she could think of to free him. I deliberately left a lot of things unsaid, and in other archives, I have been crucified for this story. Here at Ashwinder, however, I have been shown such a level of understanding and support the likes of which have humbled and overwhelmed me. Thank you again for your kind words and for your support and understanding.

loreen772014.08.22 - 10:26PM6: SixSigned
Fan-freaking-tastic. That was raw and exquisitely painful, yet the perfect ending. Sometimes the story picks it's path and you just write it down. This felt like one of those and I love that you honored the story and the underlying muse by not trying to sugar-coat it. Great story and great ending. So real and authentic.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your amazing words. I have been overwhelmed at the level of support I have received regarding this story. It has sadly not been the case on other archives, but it gladdens my heart that Ashwinder, my first and true archive, has been so open minded and accepting of what I've written.

loreen772014.08.22 - 10:08PM5: FiveSigned
Great chapter. I proceed with caution to the final chapter.....

Author's Response: Thank you.

loreen772014.08.22 - 09:57PM4: FourSigned
Wonderful chapter. I think this is the first time I have seen anyone mention a scar from Fluffy. But that is so true, he would bear a scar on his leg. I felt his vulnerability at the end was very touching.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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