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| loreen77 | 2014.08.16 - 04:57AM | 1: Part One | Signed |
| great first half. your style is engaging and your dialogue is well done. Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like the second half. | |||
| greenwood | 2014.07.11 - 12:21AM | 1: Part One | Signed |
| Well written first chapter. I look forward to reading the next. Author's Response: Thank you! | |||
| Prospera | 2014.06.27 - 02:07PM | 1: Part One | Signed |
| Thank you for a wonderful story! I think it's terrific as is, but I was thinking about something that I see a lot and I thought I would mention it. When Voldemort asks Severus about information on the Golden Trio, Snape often replies that they are "losing hope" as he does here:
"They are losing hope. Potter, Weasley, and the girl. For the past months they've been grasping at straws, completely unsure of what to do. Dumbledore left them no instructions, and they are floundering."
I think this would be more effective if the opening statement were factual rather than interpretive: "Dumbledore gave them no instructions." Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! | |||
| Pookie79 | 2014.06.27 - 04:42AM | 1: Part One | Signed |
| I really like your writing style. Your descriptions are engaging and elegant- especially the parts where Severus thinks about the cause of her weight loss and again when he reflects on the changes she's undergone since he first met her. You have real talent! :D Now on to part two. Author's Response: Thanks! For reading, and for reviewing. I liked that part too- I've thought about it a lot since reading DH. | |||
| Jong_Kahn | 2014.06.27 - 12:48AM | 1: Part One | Signed |
| I enjoy the angsty, heavy-duty stories such as this. Excellent start, and believably set in canon. Author's Response: Thanks! The last chapter is up! | |||
| Ryl | 2014.06.23 - 01:51PM | 1: Part One | Signed |
| Oh, this is good! Severus' thoughts are particularly well done. Looking forward to more! Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! More will be coming very soon. :) | |||
| Cbear8 | 2014.06.16 - 02:46PM | 1: Part One | Signed |
| Very nice start! Can't wait to read more Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! More will be out soon! | |||
| Imhilien | 2014.06.16 - 12:10AM | 1: Part One | Signed |
| A dramatic story so far and I look forward to more. :) Author's Response: Oh, the drama will increase! The last part will be out soon! | |||
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