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KatMorgan227 | 2015.05.15 - 06:03AM | 1: | Signed |
I love your stories, but I find myself discontented with them. In my opinion, you end them too abruptly to give the reader satisfaction with the tale. Perhaps you don't see the need to provide closure, but the lacking subtracts from my pleasure to the point of causing me to feel cheated by the unresolution.
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supersmallfeet | 2015.05.11 - 11:16AM | 1: | Signed |
Another amazing chapter! Can I have some more, please?
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, you may. Chapters are coming as quick as the beta can correct me thousands of grammer no-no's. Helena |
supersmallfeet | 2015.05.11 - 02:18AM | 1: | Signed |
This is shaping up to be such a great story. I love the concept of these parallels in their lives. I'm staying up way too late, can't stop reading chapters! Onward!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you're enjoying it - I'm having a blast writing it. Thank you for your kind review! Helena |
loreen77 | 2015.05.06 - 09:44PM | 1: | Signed |
Awww, that was beautiful. His actions made my eyes misty.
Author's Response: Here's a tissue. Your mascara is running :)
I'm glad you like it - thank you for letting me know! Helena |
MariBridi | 2015.05.01 - 06:17PM | 1: | Signed |
Oh Merlin! That's just perfect!
Author's Response: Thank you! Hang on for the ride, and we'll see where this goes. Helena |
Perry Downing | 2015.04.29 - 09:18AM | 1: | Signed |
I'm enjoying this immensely. Thank you!
Author's Response: I am glad you are. Thanks for writing - hopefully the next chapter in a couple of weeks! Helena |
Jong_Kahn | 2015.04.27 - 05:35PM | 1: | Signed |
Oh, this was too good: the quick and inglorious demise of Rita Skeeter! I'm sure it's not in your story plans, (or maybe you already dealt with her and I don't remember an older chapter), but maybe you could properly finish off Umbridge as well? (If you haven't already--I'm afraid I'll lose what I've written if I go back to peruse your previous chapters.)
Well done chapter--thank you!
Author's Response: Rita Skeeter didn't even deserve a death that dignified - but it was fun writing it! I had no plans to include Umbridge in this story, but you never know! thanks for your review - keep them up :) Helena |
vze57t9j | 2015.04.26 - 12:40AM | 1: | Signed |
OMG!!! Bad, wicked, naughty, evil author!!! Of all the cliffies in all the world, this one ranks in the top 5. The only saving grace is that he believes he can love and be loved in return. Awesome chapter! Your story really made me night :D
Author's Response: I am evil - I've been sitting on the next three chapters for awhile and haven't updated - life getting in the way, and all that rot. I'll try not to leave you dangling too long! Thank you for all of your kind reviews I'm so glad you are enjoying this story. Helena |
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