Reviews for Labour of Love
aliciana | 2013.12.05 - 11:06AM | 5: Chapter Four - Dealing | Signed |
Oh Teddy...I'm loving Sev in this story, as usual perhaps but I am absolutely adoring Hermione. But come on Sev we all all know you grew a fantastic pair so now is the the time to show them. He did say he had attractive genitalia previously didn't he? And whilst I appreciate he may want to have Hermione on a somewhat equal,pure,wholesome level maybe she would appreciate a bit more push and assertiveness on his part. After all every girl wants to feel she is worth persuing. Oh Teddy I could read your work all night so here is the complaint.......longer chapters and more of 'em. But I can't be greedy, it is the run up to Christmas. Hopefully we will have a crimbo present or two before the big day. Best wishes, love Ali xxxxx.
Author's Response: As always, Ali, you see things so well. I wrote this a couple of years ago, and it was short chapters, so I'm leaving them the length they were when I originally wrote this for LiveJournal. I hope you'll continue to enjoy it!! :) |
luciblue | 2013.12.04 - 03:17PM | 4: Chapter Three - Beginnings | Signed |
This is going to explode and it's going to be amazing.
Author's Response: That does seem to be the inevitable conclusion! ;) |
Orangeblossom17 | 2013.11.29 - 12:10AM | 4: Chapter Three - Beginnings | Signed |
This tale is like a vortex that sucks one in. Must. Read. More!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope to start updating a little more regularly, now that I've finished my SSHG_Promptfest story. I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
Imhilien | 2013.11.16 - 11:52PM | 4: Chapter Three - Beginnings | Signed |
Looking forward to more...
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to start posting a little more consistently. It's complete up to a point, and it doesn't have long to go. |
garnet | 2013.11.14 - 03:39PM | 4: Chapter Three - Beginnings | Signed |
The tone and narrative point of view is very different and refreshing in this story! I'm always amazed by your stories and this is no exception! I hope you're going to update this fairly regularly because I'm so curious how you'll develop this :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. This is really just an overly developed PWP, but the plot got a little more involved as I started working toward the P part! ;) I hope you will continue to enjoy it. |
dragoon811 | 2013.11.13 - 08:48PM | 4: Chapter Three - Beginnings | Signed |
This is fabulous so far - I can't wait for more! I really love how you jump between him and her and are using him as a first person narrative. As always, I love your work! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! What a lovely thing to say! I really appreciate you reading it. I hope you'll continue to enjoy it. |
Half Blood Outcast | 2013.11.13 - 12:48AM | 4: Chapter Three - Beginnings | Signed |
You've perfectly captured the anxiety anyone who has ever been hurt or humiliated may feel when they try to open themselves up to new experiences. I just love how your writing Severus in this story. Another fantastic chapter, Teddy love. :) hope all is wonderful!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Half-blood! I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story.
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erbpcola | 2013.11.11 - 09:28PM | 4: Chapter Three - Beginnings | Signed |
Eagerly awaiting the next read. Wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! |
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