Reviews for At Your Door
prettychocolate | 2013.09.12 - 11:57PM | 4: Chapter 4 | Signed |
As usual, I loved it! Your writing never disappoints. Sweet and romantic. Perfect!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much!! ♥ |
HiddenAllusion | 2013.09.12 - 07:47AM | 4: Chapter 4 | Signed |
You captured the fairytale beautifully! This is a heart-warming, lovely little story - I very much enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much!!!! ♥♥ |
Jadecadence | 2013.09.12 - 06:13AM | 4: Chapter 4 | Signed |
I liked this story a lot. But why that new unusual name for the child? Is there a significance?
Also, I think the last chapter is a tad too rushed. But I loved this addition to the completed fics. Can be 5 chapters though!
Author's Response: The significance is the fairy tale it's tied to, Valemon is The Polar Bear King. I was trying to make it on par with the fairy tale formula, which really does rush. I am glad you enjoyed it, though!!! :) |
fynnsmom | 2013.09.11 - 08:02PM | 4: Chapter 4 | Signed |
That was totally wonderful. I loved every second of it. i loved the quickness of the story at the end. I was wondering when Harry asked Hermione how long she'd known. She must've researched that fairy tale. I'm going to read some more of your stories.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I hope you enjoy the rest of my work. :) :) |
fifiotoole | 2013.09.11 - 05:54PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
very good story. ended a bit abruptly though!
Author's Response: Sorry about that - fairy tale formula has always had an abrupt ending, which is sort of fun to do, though... |
fynnsmom | 2013.09.11 - 05:50PM | 3: Chapter 3 | Signed |
I love this story so much. I hate that it's only a few chapters. I'm so glad Hermione was able to have dinner with her pen pal even if she couldn't see him. This is going to be so wonderful when she finds out who he is. When she mentions having a crush on a teacher does she mean Severus?
Author's Response: She does indeed mean Severus. :) |
fynnsmom | 2013.09.11 - 04:02PM | 2: Chapter 2 | Signed |
I think I understand better now. Severus looks like a child during the day but turns into an adult at night? He sounds like an adorable child! I don't think I've read a story based on this premise before. I like it.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, it's the good old human/adult-during-the-night-but-cursed-at-the-day premise that shows up in a few fairy tales. :) |
fynnsmom | 2013.09.11 - 03:20PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
I was looking for a new author on this site and was drawn to your name for some reason and found I really like your writing so far. This story line has a lot of promise. I love reading about Severus and Hermione. So, is Severus in the physical form of a little boy right now?
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you like my writing. ^__^. I love Snamione, too! |
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