Reviews for The Spring Turnover
whiteaster | 2013.12.14 - 02:43PM | 1: Part One | Signed |
Haunting and painful. I had to go back and re-read in order to savor what I missed the first go-around. Keep up the good work, I look forward to your next story. |
NephilimEQ | 2013.04.08 - 05:56PM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
Wow...I just...wow...epic writing, amazing writing, beautiful writing, perfect writing... I could go on and on about how amazing this was, but I don't have enough words to do so. I felt everything that she felt, heard, tasted, saw everything that she saw. Brilliantly written, perfectly choreographed. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! |
elemental_blue | 2013.04.06 - 04:46AM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
Such tenderness and frenzy, such grief and grace! I'm reminded of all those ancient proverbs about madness being the only way to truth; Hermione can only see the farthest when she is irretrievably lost. Well-conceived and well-written, as I always find your fics!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you :) I like what you said about madness being the only way to truth. That sounds like something Sylvia Plath would say, haha. |
epans19 | 2013.04.02 - 08:32PM | 1: Part One | Signed |
I loveee self slain but this one hit me right in the gut the first time you posted and I loved it as much if not more the second time reading it. I loved the language, the repition, everything. It reminds me of something great I read once but I can't remember what! The yellow wallpaper?? Hemingway's garden of Eden?? I can't remember but amazing amazing story, thank you for posting.
Author's Response: Woah, it reminded you of Hemingway? Saying that kind of thing will get you anywhere with me, haha! All kidding aside, thank you very much :) |
Buggy | 2013.04.01 - 05:08PM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
That was amazing.
Author's Response: Thanks, hon :) |
Werbsister | 2013.04.01 - 10:31AM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
I remember reading this before. I liked it then and even more now. Devastatingly sad and beautiful.
Author's Response: Yep, it was shorter before, also in the third person objective. Thanks for the compliments! |
Beth_453 | 2013.03.31 - 09:31PM | 1: Part One | Signed |
This is amazing! So evocative and eloquent. Will write a detailed review ASAP; just had to let you know how beautiful this is!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! |
who | 2013.03.31 - 05:40PM | 2: Part Two | Signed |
This is such painfully beautiful despair. Your writing is so perfect, each word buries me deeper into her emotions. Nothing I say can really do this story justice.
Author's Response: Damn. Thank you. That was a really kind thing to say. |
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