Reviews for Vitae Explicare Memento
| snapefan1983 | 2021.07.28 - 08:06PM | 18: Chapter 17 | Signed |
| So she was hermione but now she is Gretchen again? :-( poor Severus....
He watched her carefully, hoping to witness the exact moment that the change occurred. Severus wanted to know she was with him. When she took a gasping breath and began to cough, he knew the switch had been made.
“Severus?”
“What do you remember?”
“The tree. It was brilliant.”
He looked down at her.
“And?”
“And fighting you. It was like that dream-memory with Voldemort. My body was acting and I had no control over it. I’m sorry. Did I hurt you?”
“We will know in the morning. I expect my body is in shock at this time.”
She smiled up at him. Her eyes twinkled as she moved to get more comfortable beneath him.
“Did you kiss her?”
Severus narrowed his eyes at her.
“No.”
“Good.”
Measuring his thoughts, Severus considered his next words.
“Why do you ask?”
“I just don’t want to miss out on the fun, is all.”
“Cheeky,” Severus grumbled as he pushed his body away from hers. Once on his feet, he helped her up. “Better get inside before we catch our deaths. We’re both soaked through.”
“Yes, Severus,” she answered; her voice was quiet and light. She stepped up and wrapped her arms around him.
He drew her body close and Apparated them back into the house.
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| adelgado | 2014.02.15 - 03:02PM | 18: Chapter 17 | Signed |
| Glad she is getting better. I think they'll have a happy ending. thank for sharing |
| celticqueen | 2013.08.17 - 11:17PM | 18: Chapter 17 | Signed |
| I've just re-read this story, including the most recent chapters (which were new to me) and would love to read more. |
| Josette | 2013.07.26 - 03:14PM | 18: Chapter 17 | Signed |
| Just found this fic. I liked it a lot, it's original and a good story. |
| joan_glover | 2013.06.26 - 06:12PM | 18: Chapter 17 | Signed |
| Thanks for updating Triur over at GE, but it has been so long since you updated this one, I've forgotten the story. |
| joan_glover | 2013.04.13 - 01:31PM | 18: Chapter 17 | Signed |
| Sadly, I'm going to stop checking everyday for the next chapter. I hope you're well. Please don't abandon this great story. |
| vze57t9j | 2013.03.21 - 06:29AM | 18: Chapter 17 | Signed |
| Oh, Bum! I knew I was getting ahead of myself (and the story), but it was a truly, excellent update regardless of my confusion! Thanks for setting me straight. I'll keep my eyes peeled for the next chapter. :) |
| vze57t9j | 2013.03.20 - 02:11AM | 18: Chapter 17 | Signed |
OMG! Yay, yay, yay, yay, yay, yay, yay!!! This is so wonderful!!! I'll be a happy little fangirl for the rest of the month! Thank you for such an excellent update. She's BACK! :D
Author's Response: erm....actually... she not. *ducks* Very sorry for the confusion, but... well, spoilers. Message me if you wnat to talk about it it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! |
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