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ilovecake902017.09.07 - 08:00PM2: Chapter 1Signed
Omg this sorry is wonderful please please finish it

HermioneSnape1983Fan2013.11.25 - 03:22PM2: Chapter 1Signed
It had been three months after that fateful day. And Ron had just proposed. At first, she hadn’t been sure of what to say, but she realized that she had a decent chance at a normal life with him. She was no longer married to Severus. After his death, the record of the Ministry would show that one spouse was deceased, thereby making the marriage dissolved. And now here she was, sitting with him at the Burrow, their knees touching as they sat on the couch next to each other. Hermione reached across and grasped his hand, ignoring the slight sweatiness of his palm. “Yes.” SHE DIDNT EVEN WAIT LONG ENOUGH AFTER SEVERUS DEATH UNTILL SHE FELL INTO THE ARMS OF ANOTHER MAN THAT WASNT SEVERUS BUT WAS RON RON OF ALL PEOPLE!!!! WHAT A BITCH!!!! DID SHE EVEN LOVE SEVERUS??

HermioneSnape1983Fan2013.11.25 - 03:11PM3: Chapter 2Signed
she loved severus and married him and yet had feelings for Ron and was going to marry RON!!! and she didnt even bother to cheek if severus was alive or not though the minisery records!!! All that she could see was that stain, but then Ron pulled her into an embrace and she let herself collapse against him. She had feelings for him, yes, but they were different than the feelings that she had developed through her relationship with Severus. And as she tightly closed her eyes, she silently wished that she was in the Potion master’s arms. ------------------------- It had been three months after that fateful day. And Ron had just proposed. At first, she hadn’t been sure of what to say, but she realized that she had a decent chance at a normal life with him. She was no longer married to Severus. After his death, the record of the Ministry would show that one spouse was deceased, thereby making the marriage dissolved. And now here she was, sitting with him at the Burrow, their knees touching as they sat on the couch next to each other. Hermione reached across and grasped his hand, ignoring the slight sweatiness of his palm. “Yes.” That one word was all that she said, and she watched as a broad smile crossed his face. Her fate was sealed by that simple word, and she ignored the fact that something in the back of her mind was saying that she was making a mistake. It couldn’t be a mistake. She was saying yes to marriage with a man that she…cared deeply for. Ron then said something that shocked her. “Well, I was pretty sure that was going to be your answer…so I thought that we could go straight to the Ministry this weekend and have my father do the ceremony.” She looked at him in shock, but he continued. “You see, I don’t want to put off any part of our life together, and both Mum and Dad are alright with it, and it gives you enough time to tell your parents…so, is that alright?” She continued to gape, still in shock. A proposal and now already she was getting married? She had hoped for something…romantic. But then again, she thought to herself, this was Ron she was talking about. What did she honestly expect from him? Hermione simply nodded, and two days later she found herself practically being dragged by Ron down the hall in the Ministry that led to a small chapel. Apparently it had been put there when there were once arranged marriages between pure-blood wizarding families, so that no one could try to skirt their duty. They walked into the chapel, and there was a sudden change of atmosphere. Instead of eager anticipation, there was a sense of foreboding. One look at Arthur Weasley’s face told her that she was right…there was something wrong. Ron wasn’t completely dense, and had picked up on his father’s expression almost immediately after entering the small chapel. “Dad? What’s wrong?” Arthur said nothing, merely glancing back down at the paper that she now realized that he held in his hands. He looked at her and then back at the paper…and then back at her. His expression had changed to one of betrayal, and Hermione felt utterly confused as he uttered his next words. “How could you, Hermione? How could you do this to us?” She stared at him in confusion, not understanding what he meant, and he merely shoved the paper at her. Quickly, she read through the document, wanting to understand exactly what she had done to garner such anger from such a dear friend, a father practically. Seal of Marriage, #3-8-97-39214476 Wife: Hermione Jean Granger Husband: Severus Tobias Snape Date of Marriage: the Eighth of March in the Year of our Lord Nineteen-Hundred and Ninety-Seven Witness: Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore Recognized by: the Ministry of Magic Spell Used: Aeternum Vincula Amoris And then, at the very bottom of the document, was the stamp of the Ministry in blazing red. Hermione looked at it in shock, knowing that the document should have been destroyed. What she held in her hands at that moment, should not, by all things that were logical, exist. It was impossible for it to exist…unless… No. No, it couldn’t be… But it made perfect sense. It all fit together. She felt it slip from her fingers to the floor and she barely even registered the fact that Ron had leaned down and picked it up and was now reading it. She lifted her fingers to her lips, barely believing what she had just realized… Severus was alive. and yet she was still going to marry RON!!!! BITCH!!! i wouldnt have said yes!!!

HermioneSnape1983Fan2013.11.25 - 02:29PM1: Chapter 1Signed
they did use protection incase of pregnantcy and etc??

loreen772013.11.20 - 11:22AM2: Chapter 1Signed
More please, can not wait to see Harry's reaction.

loreen772013.11.20 - 11:08AM3: Chapter 2Signed
Kinda feel bad for Ron, not his fault. So where is her hubby and why did he dissapear?

loreen772013.11.20 - 10:57AM1: Chapter 1Signed
This feels so much more intense and deep in their bond. Their silence is such a great mechanism to shiw this intensity. Great idea!

Jong_Kahn2013.10.31 - 01:21AM2: Chapter 1Signed
Shouldn't this chapter's title be "Chapter 3"? Just asking...and thank you for the good chapter!

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