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Reviews for I'll Take You In Pieces: A (Morbid) Love Story

loreen772016.04.07 - 06:36AM1: I'll Take You In Pieces: A (Morbid) Love StorySigned
It's been a few years since I first read this and it is just as great now as it was then. Such intensity and creepiness. I love how you wrote this, the way it jumped back and forth. It added a disconnect which made you feel her descent into madness even more acutely. Great job!

windlicht2015.11.18 - 05:53PM1: I'll Take You In Pieces: A (Morbid) Love StorySigned
Beautiful... Very well written. Your story was the first in a long time that made me get out my dictionary and I like that. I read English almost as easily as German by now, but rare words are still difficult. Like vituperative. Those words mean that your writing style is special, though, and that's good. There are few fan fiction works that stand out because of exemplary writing style. Bravo.

Jong_Kahn2015.04.16 - 01:38PM1: I'll Take You In Pieces: A (Morbid) Love StorySigned
Wow. Seems to me I've read and reviewed this before, but I don't see my review here, so perhaps it got lost? Whatever happened, I know I remember this magnificent, best paragraph: "Whatever it was they had, it wasn’t beautiful. It wasn’t comforting. It didn’t feel like home. It was hard, and jagged, and it tore up her insides when it was wrenched out of her. It was cold like the moon in winter. It was impossibly strong and brittle at the same time. Like that charged second between lightning and thunder. Like the smell of dirt. Like an impetuous, romping torrent; hissing, crying, colliding, churning up gravel, wearing down the rocks showing through its surface as it hurls water and foam into the air." As strange and ugly as the morality of this tale is, it is extremely well written. I'm favoriting it.

Ajilia Lyran2013.11.21 - 07:55PM1: I'll Take You In Pieces: A (Morbid) Love StorySigned
I love this. A lot. I love seeing a darker side of Hermione like this, without her taking it out on herself. Please, keep writing. I will read anything, if you write it with this energy.

jothar2013.11.19 - 02:44PM1: I'll Take You In Pieces: A (Morbid) Love StorySigned
Well, that was some of the best writing around. The scene and time changes flow perfectly. The hardness feels essential; relentless and logical. Almost refreshing an a strange way. I can only hope that the result of her actions was worth it. We don't really know at the end, do we? Thanks for this unusual story.

romanceme2013.10.06 - 06:27PM1: I'll Take You In Pieces: A (Morbid) Love StorySigned
Dood. The things you did to me. That was slick! Seriously, really, really good. I know this sort of thing doesn't have more to it, but a part of me wishes there were more...

kteex32013.07.17 - 01:00AM1: I'll Take You In Pieces: A (Morbid) Love StorySigned
HOLY CRAP. This was so amazing, so well written, so unlike anything I have read before. This is beautiful in every way. Thank you for this magnificence.

Zenagaserpent2013.05.20 - 09:12PM1: I'll Take You In Pieces: A (Morbid) Love StorySigned
Stunning. Absolutely stunning. I adore your use of language and how you chose to tell the story in confused snippets that all came together and made sense in the end. Very, very beautiful work.

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