Reviews for Broken By A Kiss
Jong_Kahn | 2015.10.27 - 01:08PM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
Almost three years later, I'm with the first two reviewers here: PLEASE give us the other chapter you've started. This can sort of stand as a one-shot, but it's an awfully frustrating and unfulfilled one. Do come back to this and finish the frustration off--I beg you! (And thanks for having written this chapter--I'll give you a "10" for your Treats bag, to tempt you!) |
loreen77 | 2013.03.09 - 06:59PM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
Brillant. I loved it. So raw so much desperation. Well written. |
bubblybabs | 2013.01.11 - 01:43AM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
I don't understand what the potion is for... I understand the plot but am wondering about the potion...
Author's Response: Hi Bubblybabs,
Unfortunately, the potions isn't anything; it is superfluousness to the story, simply a filler to give the fic depth. Sorry to disappoint. :) Thanks for reviewing.
Mel |
Loyd1957 | 2013.01.07 - 11:47AM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
I can see this as a one shot, but I agree with the other reviewer. I would like to see what actually is transpiring here. Is this just the hopelessness of Hermione and not knowing where to turn?
Author's Response: I started to write a second part, but I haven't finished it. We'll see if I get further with it... Thanks for reviewing! |
IrishChic20 | 2013.01.02 - 09:25AM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
You can't leave it there! Please don't leave it as a one shot!
Author's Response: HAHA! You stinker! Don't think I didn't see what you told Laralee! :) Funny thing is that I woke up this morning and all of sudden I was hit with a second part for this fic. Though I didn't plan it, I've got part two and three floating around in my head now. Part two is half way written already. I'm inclined to think it is all your fault, IrishChic! LOL! Thanks for reviewing dear and for asking for more. |
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