Reviews for Guilt and a Smile
loreen77 | 2013.04.17 - 07:37PM | 9: Chapter 9: Home It Is, Then | Signed |
Oh no, poor HG...poor SS....
Author's Response: I know. I hate putting them in pain :( |
loreen77 | 2013.04.17 - 07:32PM | 8: Chapter 8: I'll Come Back | Signed |
I like using malfoy as a back up plan, great idea.
Author's Response: Thanks. :) Kind of a rude deposit in the Manor, though.. *thunk-pop* Oh, hey, a body.... |
loreen77 | 2013.04.17 - 07:27PM | 7: Chapter 7: I Regret It | Signed |
Wow, great job. As i read your version I realixe that there were questions i should have had from the novel and while i wasn't smart enough to ask these questions, you were. You asked them and found logical answers for them. Brillant job. Very well thought out.
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much! I had been WAITING to write that! :-D |
loreen77 | 2013.04.17 - 07:10PM | 6: Chapter 6: Protect It | Signed |
Evil evil bad author stopping there, glad i can rush to the next chapter.....good job conveying his emotional state.
Author's Response: Sorry, should have warned you - I am an evil, wicked author-person. :) |
loreen77 | 2013.04.17 - 07:05PM | 5: Chapter 5: Hermione | Signed |
Nice job....quickly running to next chapter to read.
Author's Response: Thanks! Run faster! (I'm joking, really..) |
loreen77 | 2013.04.17 - 06:57PM | 4: Chapter 4: Perfume and Hope | Signed |
Great chapter, what solice it must provide him to know one person knows the truth. My heart breaks hfor him.
Author's Response: Mine, too :( Poor Severus |
loreen77 | 2013.04.17 - 05:50PM | 2: Chapter 2: Hermione | Signed |
I am enjoying each perspective, i feel you are capturing their individual character very well.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like the changes between viewpoints :) |
loreen77 | 2013.04.17 - 05:05PM | 1: Chapter 1: Severus | Signed |
What a great start,, just brillant. The emotons you convey at the wedding were flawless....great job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I actually felt so sorry for him writing that :( |
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