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Reviews for Guilt and a Smile

Jong_Kahn2013.06.23 - 04:07AM17: Chapter 17: Sweet KidSigned
Sweet little chapter, though sad at the Lily and her parents' deaths part. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks - it bothered me....how did he not hear about magic from his grandparents? So...well... I killed them. Lily's fault, causing her to be even more protective of Harry, and also makes Petunia hate magic even more, etc.Oops, I'm rambling!

Jong_Kahn2013.06.23 - 04:00AM16: Chapter 16: I Can Be MagnanimousSigned
Ah! Now I think I understand what Severus was hiding from Albus in those early chapters: his being secret Godfather to Harry. It explains the mental 'pushes' he gave to Draco, telling him to stay inside Hogwarts, as well as 'telling' Draco where to take his body once they were inside his house. AND it explains his 'pushing' into Harry's mind back in the Shrieking Shack. You are brilliant, to have come up with this, just brilliant! Another "10" for you, tootsie!

Author's Response: Thank you very, very much!! I've been threading that for a long time. :)

Jong_Kahn2013.06.23 - 03:46AM15: Chapter 15: Energy ExpendedSigned
Thanks to the fine work Jason and Tom did in the films as Lucius and Draco, the believability of the Malfoy familial bond feels true. Well, that and JKR's writing on that count. And here? Yours, too! Thank you!

Author's Response: Oh, good, thank you! I'm not overly-familiar with their bond, so I'm glad to hear I've gotten it right. :)

Jong_Kahn2013.06.23 - 03:38AM14: Chapter 14: Swear To ItSigned
Good for Draco! And good for Hermione and Snape, that he's on their side to help now. Good work.

Author's Response: Thanks! :-D

Jong_Kahn2013.06.23 - 03:35AM13: Chapter 13: HopeSigned
His being Harry's secret Godfather helps supply another profound reason he would do all in his power to protect Harry, no matter what. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks :-D

Jong_Kahn2013.06.23 - 03:20AM12: Chapter 12: Trials and TrustSigned
I can't believe I haven't read or reviewed the last seven chapters. Not an entirely bad thing--this way I get to read seven in a row, woohoo! Thanks!

Author's Response: And thank YOU for reviewing each one!!! It makes me feel so special! ♥

flyte2013.06.21 - 09:18PM18: Chapter 18: InterludeSigned
I like your story. It's a good tale with Hermione and Draco working together as they are. Hermione's name being the password was a nice touch.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot, I really appreciate it! :)

jaemistoryteller2013.06.19 - 05:08PM19: Chapter 19: DiscoveriesSigned
Now that was a nifty cool chapter and I am happily waiting for the next one.

Author's Response: Thank you :-D I'm glad you thought so, I really appreciate your review :) :)

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