Reviews for Vitae Explicare Memento
|Jong_Kahn||2013.02.16 - 01:29AM||13: Chapter 12||Signed |
|Well! So Hermione is finally getting more conscious comfort from Severus' smell! (Yeah, yeah--she's remembering, too!) This means, I hope, that soon she will maybe get to take more profound comfort from him--and give him comfort, as well? We can only hope! |
Author's Response: Oh, yes! There's a lot to be said of a favorite smell! As for the rest, I think Severus is still very prickly about it all. Can he really say he knows what to expect out of her? I'm not so sure....
|cottontail||2012.09.17 - 09:08PM||13: Chapter 12||Signed |
|Oh I do love this story.. I certainly agree with Albus for once in that he needs to step it up a bit. She stays in his bed to surround herself with the smell of HIM. If he could only see that she needs to feel him, feel his love for her.. Please update soon!|
Author's Response: Thanks! More is coming soon, for sure... But you know Snape, he's not going to let a little thing like his feelings get in the way of a plan, right?
|loreen77||2012.08.18 - 08:52PM||13: Chapter 12||Signed |
|Great chapter, thias srory is brillant.|
Author's Response: Thanks! More soon!
|MsTree||2012.08.04 - 03:02PM||13: Chapter 12||Signed |
|*snerk* Hagrid hasn't changed, has he? Loved how the Room just faded to normal and Gretchen/Hermione wasn't there. ^_^|
Author's Response: Well... it knows when it's not needed ;-) Thanks for reading/reviewing!
|severus49||2012.08.04 - 12:22PM||13: Chapter 12||Signed |
|It seems like Albus hit the nail on the head, didn't he? And it seems Severus didn't want to even admit it - even to himself. Albus is right, Hermione needs a big gesture from Severus, or at least enough intimacy from him in order for her to respond for a long enough time. Hermione doesn't really have a reason to do anything other than remember as long as he's not making her feel like she's an integral part of his life and the marriage. I hope Severus rectifies that soon for Rori's sake!|
Author's Response: That's Albus for you, right? That needle-like insight, prodding you closer to something you don't necessarily want to acknowledge :-D And I definitely think Sev has a bit of martyr syndrome when it comes to his love life, you know?
|vze57t9j||2012.08.04 - 04:18AM||13: Chapter 12||Signed |
|Yay! More memories and more bridges back to Hermione! I loved this chapter. Poor Hagrid! His rump is gonna be sore after this visit. Well done! :D|
Author's Response: Yes! Although, I think Hagrid has a thick hide around that gooey center of his... :-D
|Jong_Kahn||2012.08.04 - 03:01AM||13: Chapter 12||Signed |
|I like the way you're weaving this all together, both in Hermione's mind, and in the story itself. Very nice job, thank you.|
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's definitely something like weaving to unweave just to weave it all up again. Glad you like it!
|Lucretia123||2012.08.04 - 01:44AM||13: Chapter 12||Signed |
|Thank you for the update! Can't wait for more!|
Author's Response: More is coming! just slowly... thanks for sticking with me!