Reviews for Making Love
Kittyiris | 2012.08.03 - 01:22AM | 2: Chapter Two | Signed |
You know, you were really worried about nothing. This fic was amazing! A little silly, a little sweet, and a lot dirty, but 100% heartfelt.
Amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm thrilled to bits you liked it! |
moonlitjune | 2012.08.01 - 02:33AM | 2: Chapter Two | Signed |
I almost didn't read it, I really don't enjoy Severus with other women. But as I hit the back button and scrolled through other stories, I paused. I thought, 'This is Teddy. Her stories are like unwrapping presents on Christmas. I love everything she writes. Just read it, it's bound to be enjoyable and sexy. Just relax and let it happen. Maybe it won't be that bad that theres another girl.' And I did read it, and Teddy, you really are a miracle worker. It didn't bother me, at all really. Because it was still about them. You are brilliant, and you pulled this off. So, you said you wrote outside of your comfort zone, and I can totally agree that this was me reading outside of my comfort zone, and yet it worked. Just goes to show how epic and amazing you are. ;)
-Violet
Author's Response: Violet, you have no idea how happy your comments made me feel! Thank you for giving the story a try. I am thrilled you enjoyed it, and that it pleased you. I am trying to write outside my comfort zone a little more now, and have had great success with a little fic called Lemon Squeezy (it's on the Occlumency side), but my first and last love will always be Hermione and Severus! |
aliciana | 2012.07.23 - 09:02AM | 2: Chapter Two | Signed |
Well you know me Teddy...the only other bird Sev can get jiggy with other than Herms is me BUT.....I felt that little Ginny was acting as a sort of hands on sexual counsellor /instructor so as long as no Sevs or Herms were injured in the making of this highly erotically charged and well written fic....I'm very pleased. Phew! Was that one sentence? And like your previous reviewer I also felt that we should hear more about Dave the Gargoyle.....Quasimodo's wedding dance song.....the bells are ringing...for me and gargoyle.....well done me dear. Sorry...summer cold....excess Benylin.Oh that and Olymic Fever....not! Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
Author's Response: Believe me, Ali, it was not easy - I had to have stgulik take me firmly in hand and tell me not to be afraid that Ginny would take him away from me - erm - Hermione, so I'm right there with you, sister! I like your take on the sex counsellor/instructor angle - I'm gonna adopt that as her new title here! I'm also delighted that you liked his Gargoyle's name. Like Trigger, I named him Rodney, after 'Dave'. As always, Ali, thank you for always being encouraging and supportive, and providing me with wonderful comments. |
vze57t9j | 2012.07.23 - 05:13AM | 2: Chapter Two | Signed |
Yay! I love a HEA! Very sweet and satisfying. :D
Author's Response: Excellent - me to - Go, HEA! Thank you for your amazing comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, and I appreciate your warm words of encouragement. |
vze57t9j | 2012.07.23 - 04:35AM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
I am constantly stunned when I read the reviews of other readers. I don't understand why one feels the need to write them if all they can do is be snide. I will step off my soap-box for the remainder of the review.
Excellent beginning! I'm not sure if this made the LJ recipient happy but it certainly brightened my day. Sometimes it is the ones that we desire the most that are the hardest to approach, and unfortunately what is plain to everyone else's sight, eludes those directly involved. This fic has shown the awkward hesitation, angst, self doubt and loathing in dramatic relief that everyone has the misfortune to go through, and I loved every word of it. Well done! :D
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie, for your wonderful comments. I appreciate each and every word, more than I could ever articulate here. |
anoesis | 2012.07.21 - 11:54AM | 2: Chapter Two | Signed |
Considering that you probably spent at least part of the time writing this wanting to hiss at Ginny to get the hell away from Snape, the end result is as deft as always.
My absolute favourite part? That his gargoyle is called Dave. Priceless.
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie! I must say, I started this story thinking, 'no sweat', then a few days later I'm crying to stgulik my beta, "Jules, I don't want Ginny touching him!!!" She patted me on the head and said, "Just pretend it's Hermione, then change the name!" It was tougher than I thought - I don't like sharing him. I'm so glad you got the 'Dave' joke. I loved giving him 'Trigger's' name for Rodney. |
Half Blood Outcast | 2012.07.21 - 09:41AM | 2: Chapter Two | Signed |
That was delicious, Teddy!! Oh, I just realized what a bad pun that was, considering this story lol oh well! I meant it :) I loved it. Absolutely devoured it when I saw it in the queue (there go the bad puns again) and I'll be reading it over and over for a long time to come :D
Author's Response: Oh, don't you worry, Half blood - I found your comments very yummy!! ;) I'm really glad you enjoyed the story - and you can write me all the bad puns you want! ;) |
Syvah | 2012.07.20 - 11:58PM | 2: Chapter Two | Signed |
Snape and dark chocolate; sounds like a good time to me! I enjoyed Severus getting caught in that double-blind with the candies. Thanks for sharing :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Yes, Severus and dark chocolate are a winning combination. |
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