Reviews for Just to Be
loreen77 | 2012.05.06 - 10:57PM | 23: Harry and Hermoine | Signed |
What a sad and desperately linely way to loose ones virginity. I know ss was angry, but i am suprised hg ran off without waiting for him to cool off. But i guess sometimes harsh words from the one you love are worse then from someone you do not care for.
Author's Response: I envisioned it happening just before their trip to Godric's Hollow, which I think was the low point for both of them. I refuse to believe Hermione didn't have some sort of breakdown. It was a mistake on her part to walk out, that's for sure. Harsh words definitely hurt the most when they come from someone you love. |
greenwood | 2012.04.26 - 10:34PM | 23: Harry and Hermoine | Signed |
Predictable I guess given the rant Severus gave. I would have left as well if I were Hermione. I thought it was a great chapter, however, and liked the setup for what may come.
Author's Response: I wanted parallels between their past relationships (Severus and Lily, Harry and Hermione) as well as a trigger that would really set Severus off. |
Lucretia123 | 2012.04.20 - 03:42AM | 23: Harry and Hermoine | Signed |
Oh I don't know who I feel sorry for more - Hermione or Severus? Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Neither one handled this very well, did they? |
Jong_Kahn | 2012.04.19 - 11:22PM | 23: Harry and Hermoine | Signed |
I don't remember when I read this story (more specifically, this chapter) previously. I cried when reading Harry's legilimised memories. You are a hell of a writer, lady. Thank you so much for this chapter, this story. You rock.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I got a bit teary-eyed when I wrote it. Harry and Hermione were not in a good place when it happened. |
verasuspense | 2012.04.19 - 10:38PM | 23: Harry and Hermoine | Signed |
My guess is that Hermione has gone to Australia. It's as far away from England as she can get and still be in an English-speaking country.
Author's Response: You'll see :) |
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