Reviews for Hardest of Hearts
MlleGigi | 2016.08.27 - 02:55PM | 1: 1. | Signed |
How terribly sad that Hermione doubts herself so much...although there's certainly evidence in canon to suggest that she's not nearly as confident in herself as she might appear to be on the outside. |
adelgado | 2013.04.20 - 05:47PM | 1: 1. | Signed |
Wow What a sad postion to be in. |
greenwood | 2012.04.10 - 12:49PM | 1: 1. | Signed |
Wow! This is a wonderful analysis of Hermione's view of the world. I never thought about how her friendship with Harry and Ron really was the only thing going. I could sort of buy her parents slipping away but because she was an only child, I think their relationship would have been more tight. But I will go with it. I think it quite believable that Hermione would have had no friends if she had not stumbled on Harry and Ron. Harry needed her (and her personality) to "fill the gap". Well done first chapter and I look forward to more. |
Elou | 2012.04.09 - 08:09AM | 1: 1. | Signed |
How heart wrenching. So sad.
Thank you for sharing~Elou |
loreen77 | 2012.03.25 - 04:34PM | 1: 1. | Signed |
Fear and insecurities manifest in the most atypical ways sometimes. Her bogart desplays this very well. It is an image you would never expect, but the convolted logic mKes it very plausable. |
severus49 | 2012.03.25 - 03:34PM | 1: 1. | Signed |
I think the clue into getting this to evolve and continue into a larger story has to rest with the sentence "Snape understood that Hermione Granger was in a very precarious position, much like his own, and he would do anything in his power to keep her there; she was the only sanity in the trio." How does he keep her there? Did he just protect her out of a sense of duty - or is there actually something more? Does he want her to protect him in return, down deep inside? I hope I've given you something to think about, and I hope you regain your inspiration very soon! Good luck!~
Author's Response: I have been thinking about this since you reviewed--thank you! I'm pretty sure I now have the direction I want to take planned out... thanks for seeing something I didn't see :) |
Derelict Author | 2012.03.25 - 10:59AM | 1: 1. | Signed |
At first I was raising an eyebrow--Harry's parents? A little sketchy as the boggart. However, your logic behind all of it is very interesting; you're taking something I've seen touched on in other fics (Hermione not having much to make her friends with Harry and Ron outside of circumstances) and flushing it out in a way I've never seen before. I'm just curious to see where you'll go with this, now...
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you found it interesting, and I hope I can continue it in just as interesting a way... |
Aflibble | 2012.03.24 - 10:52PM | 1: 1. | Signed |
Wonderful story I look forward to finding out where you will take this. It has lots of potential. |
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