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Reviews for Just to Be

roon02012.07.02 - 07:11PM12: ResignationSigned
Poor Neville does not deserve Snape's contempt. I loved the scene's between SS & Harry and SS and Hermione. Wonderfully done.

Author's Response: Neville doesn't deserve it. I modeled their dynamic on that between Michael Scott and Toby Flenderson on the US version of "The Office." It's a completely irrational, undeserved, unjustified hatred. I love it; it fit to me :)

greenwood2012.02.27 - 08:25PM12: ResignationSigned
The ending was grand! I loved the choice of house and I bet it will make all the difference in the world for now he can treat Slytherins differently and give them respect from the "outside".

Author's Response: It will definitely have some consequences.

ks516892012.02.25 - 11:48AM12: ResignationSigned
I’ve only now had the chance to catch up on the last three chapters, so this may be an extra-long review. I still love what you’re doing with Luna’s character. I feel like there was depth in many of her strange proclamations (not all of them lol) in the books that is often overlooked, but you’ve definitely incorporated some of it into her work with the children and her insights about Snape and Hermione. I really appreciate your mature characterization of Ron! I am definitely of the school of thought that Severus and Hermione can get together without Ron being a total git about it. He has to grow up sometime, after all. Harry wanting to get to know Snape is definitely something I imagine would have happened had Snape not died in Book 7. I really look forward to seeing how that relationship develops. Placing Leopold in Gryffindor was definitely an interesting plot twist! Lastly, but I suppose most importantly, I am enjoying the pace at which Hermione and Severus’ relationship is developing. Their interactions, doubts, and fears all feel really natural, and I eagerly await the next chapter to see where their relationship goes next. Sorry for the long review, if you can’t tell, I’m really enjoying this story lol.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Luna was so much fun to write. I didn't like her character in the books, but she was the only person who could have filled the role of counselor, and through writing I really fell in love with her. Ron doesn't have to be a total git for Hermione to not be with him--I think the books give us a few reasons, but him being a total and complete ass isn't one of them. I also thought Harry would cling to Severus as the last person from the Marauder generation who knew his parents, plus I also think he was genuinely touched by what he saw in the Prince's Tale and wants to know more (like we all do!). And I'm glad you like the pace of their relationship--I think you'd scarcely find two more insecure people in this universe, so things would have to move veeeery slowly for them ;) Thanks for reviewing, glad you like the story!

little_rose2012.02.24 - 01:35PM12: ResignationSigned
Amazing! I am loving this story, just read at least 5 chapters back to back - good stuff!:)

Author's Response: Thank you :)

iris m2012.02.24 - 12:56PM12: ResignationSigned
man this just keeps getting better :) cant wait to see whats next.(jumping up and down in my seat) and bit-bit did not go into his families house...wow that was crazy, wish I could see snapes face when he gets that letter :)

Author's Response: You will, next chapter ;)

verasuspense2012.02.23 - 08:52PM12: ResignationSigned
Severus will probably faint when he finds out. ;-)

Author's Response: You'll see ;)

sudsnbubbles562012.02.23 - 05:25PM12: ResignationSigned
I just want to say that this is one of my favorite pieces of fanfiction! It is SO different from any plot line I have read in a long time. I am on edge waiting for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Andromeda2012.02.23 - 02:18PM12: ResignationSigned
Hahahhahahahahahahaha.... hahaahhaahahahahaha! I knew that was coming and I still laughed imagining Severus reading Leo's letter later. hahaha...

Author's Response: Oh you'll see him reading it in the next chapter.

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