Reviews for Vitae Explicare Memento
|vze57t9j||2012.02.29 - 03:05AM||6: Chapter 5||Signed |
|"...and Gryffindor's are foolish." -- I love it! Spoken like a Daddy's little girl should. Excellent chapter!!! :D|
Author's Response: :-D Yes. The sky is blue and Gryffindors are foolish! teehee
|Oddity||2012.02.28 - 12:56AM||6: Chapter 5||Signed |
|Rori is being a strong little girl -- just like her mother was at that age, I imagine. Poor Ron... hopefully Gretchen never tells him that he's unnecessarily tedious! |
Author's Response: :-D ... while tact might not be one of Gretchen's virtues, I think she'll give Ron some allowances, if only to keep from rocking the boat.
|loreen77||2012.02.15 - 03:50PM||6: Chapter 5||Signed |
|This story is hauntingly beautiful and lovely. Rori is amazing for her age. 10++|
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Writing Rori is a bit of a trick, I'm glad you like her!
|Elou||2012.02.14 - 04:11PM||6: Chapter 5||Signed |
|I do love how this is unfolding. I have a thrumming excitement as I read. It is wonderful. Very emotional. I myself have my own Rory, and she is a tad younger than "your" Rori, but just a cherished as your written one is.
I look forward to the unwinding of her mind.
Thank you for sharing~Elou
Author's Response: Aw... Rories are great! What a special chord to strike here! I'm glad you are enjoying this so much! more soon
|Jong_Kahn||2012.02.14 - 12:29AM||6: Chapter 5||Signed |
|That chapter was well worth waiting for, though I would be happy to have one appear sooner! Seriously, I'm glad another exceptional Legilimens like Albus is on hand to help break Hermione out of being Gretchen. I loved Rori's interactions with Gretchen; I felt both characters were believable and acted as naturally as they could in such a hard-to-deal-with situation. Well done, and thanks for all your work!|
Author's Response: Thanks! Having Albus around will be very useful, as long as he doesn't give Severus any more big surprises... More with Rori and Gretchen is on the way! :-D
|MsTree||2012.02.13 - 04:26PM||6: Chapter 5||Signed |
|I WANT that bedroom! *grin* Such a satisfying chapter. And off to Ollivander's we go. ^_^|
Author's Response: I know! Rori's a lucky duck! I'm glad you like it, more soon!