Reviews for Father Figure
jenidralph | 2012.03.09 - 10:01AM | 12: Chapter Twelve | Signed |
"The angel sleeping on his right shoulder was curiously silent." - and we all reap the benefits!!! I love the dirty vicar. I can't write more because I must go to the next chapter. I have been patient and haven't read ahead at the Exchange. I deserve my reward.
Author's Response: You certainly do! Well done! |
loreen77 | 2012.03.09 - 06:40AM | 12: Chapter Twelve | Signed |
Lol, loved it. What a kinky use for the candle. Priest severus.....love it!!
Author's Response: I'm blaming the candle on stgulik, who threw me a hint about it so huge a blind man could have seen it! Yes, for some reason, the Vicar!Severus captured a lot of imaginations, so I'm not the only one with that particular kink, I see! ;) |
Lucretia123 | 2012.03.09 - 06:38AM | 13: Epilogue | Signed |
Bravo! Thank you for a wonderful story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much - I'm really glad you enjoyed it! |
loreen77 | 2012.03.07 - 10:46PM | 11: Chapter Eleven | Signed |
Nice job. Loved the use of winky. May the spirit of bellatrix suffer in hades for all eternity, she was one twistedly insane person.
Author's Response: That she was. I have tried over the years to feel sorry for her - obviously she was psychotic and a psychopath, but I just can't bring myself to. She was, in many ways, more evil than Voldemort. |
loreen77 | 2012.03.07 - 04:34PM | 10: Chapter Ten | Signed |
Uh oh, severus may be a jerk, but at least he gets his error now and understands hermione did nothing wrong......now he just must find her to tell her. Great writing as always. Love your work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I really appreciate the feedback and I hope you will continue to enjoy the story.
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jenidralph | 2012.03.07 - 10:26AM | 11: Chapter Eleven | Signed |
They are just so perfect together. I'm so glad that they got that resolved and will be able to continue. I hope to see more of the cave. Thanks, Teddy!!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm sure they paid the cave a few more visits! ;) The last two chapters will be up soon. I'm so glad you are enjoying it. |
jenidralph | 2012.03.07 - 09:45AM | 10: Chapter Ten | Signed |
I find it odd that I can equally enjoy a truly evil Bastard!Lucius as well as Reformed!Lucius. Their conversation was wonderful. I loved the comment about hexing his balls to Barcelona, LOL! I doubt she was upset by his confession that he wanted her when she was so young. He never touched her, he's not a perv. I hope they can make things right. I'm off to read the next chappie. :)
Author's Response: Yes, after making him such a baddy in I Want That One, I wanted to redeem him a little! LOL No, Severus though he tries his best not to realise it, has always been a gentleman. This was such a fun chapter to write. I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
aliciana | 2012.03.06 - 06:34AM | 11: Chapter Eleven | Signed |
Thank god for Lucius AND house-elves. I want one of each. Lovely chapter Teddy showing that both their old and new relaionships have not been damaged. It may also bring Hermione some closure/more healing now that she has discussed her trauma at Malfoy Manor. Great stuff and a delight to have two chapters in one go. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.
Author's Response: Thanks, babe. There are two chapters left, which I will try to upload this week. I'm so glad you enjoyed it! |
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