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Reviews for The Beginning of Truth

Nerdlee2012.07.31 - 09:05AM22: The Devil's DenSigned
Such a nail biter. You do love the torment, don't you? ~Mia

Author's Response: Yeah, I tend to write that way. I like to keep my readers on their toes. Thanks for reading and for the review!

Jong_Kahn2012.07.30 - 11:22PM22: The Devil's DenSigned
Ooh, you evil cliffie-monger! Still, I'm glad that all four of them are together, even though Sev and Hermione are both in terrible shape. Now we'll all be on tenterhooks till the next time--aaaaaaugh! Seriously, though--thank you for this and all your chapters. You're doing a great job. Another "10" for you!

Author's Response: Woohoo! I love those tens! I'm glad you liked this chapter. I write for people like you, so I'm glad you get enjoyment from all this work. Next chapter is being revised as we speak. Thanks a million Jong_Kahn!!

Jong_Kahn2012.07.30 - 11:10PM21: The Seeker Goes SeekingSigned
Excellent, excellent chapter! Severus and Hermione got to really kiss; Hermione got to play Wormtail so he activated the DA galleon; and Harry got to use his connection to Voldemort to figure out where he was, and thanks to Ron. I'm glad I didn't read this till the next chapter was ready, since there's another treat waiting for me! One thing you should correct, though. It's the first sentence in the paragraph which begins "Antonin glared at Bellatrix one final time before he crossed the distance between himself and Severus, who LAY motionless on the floor." It should be "lay" there, not "lie". Other than that--a perfect chapter. Thank you so much for all your hard work!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the great review. That error has been corrected. Thanks for pointing it out. It's hard to catch your own mistakes. I hope you enjoy the next chapter.

meteoritestrike2012.07.29 - 05:30PM21: The Seeker Goes SeekingSigned
This ia an awesome story. I give you many kudos for your work!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! The next chapter will be posted soon!

youburnwithus2012.07.20 - 06:57PM21: The Seeker Goes SeekingSigned
another great one - can't wait for the next chapter! this one was uploaded on my birthday, and was a mighty fine present!

Author's Response: Happy belated birthday! The next chapter is about ready for publishing, I’m hoping to get it in the queue by tomorrow afternoon. I decided to rewrite some stuff last minute. Anyway, I’m so happy you are enjoying the chapters. Hopefully this next one won’t disappoint. Thanks for reading and for reviewing, youburnwithus!

MsTree2012.07.19 - 04:54PM21: The Seeker Goes SeekingSigned
Hermione sure knows Pettigrew's weak spot, doesn't she. *grin* The boys to the rescue! Maybe? ^_^

Author's Response: Wormtail is an idiot. I used it to my… er… Hermione’s advantage. Boys to the rescue and then some! Next chapter is real fun. Thanks for reading and for the review!

verasuspense2012.07.19 - 12:56PM21: The Seeker Goes SeekingSigned
Yeah right, Harry : apparate right into Voldemort's clutches ! "Dolohov drug Snape to his feet". The past tense of 'drag' is dragged, unless you are writing in dialect.

Author's Response: Harry might surprise you. Thanks for catching that error by the way. I guess that's the Kentucky coming out in me.

Andromeda2012.07.19 - 08:34AM21: The Seeker Goes SeekingSigned
That little bastard! I hope that rat-bastard gets a good smack down from the group. Hitting Hermione like that. I fecking hate that little twerp. Very good chapter! Loved how Snape woke up. The talk with Voldemort was brief, but showed that he was more interested in preserving the purity of magic, than the purity of blood. Very well done :)

Author's Response: Wormtail will be brought to justice very, very soon. The talk with Voldemort was very telling I thought. I spent a lot of time on that because, to me, his motives/behavior defines his character. I’m thrilled you enjoyed this chapter. The next one is coming soon! Thanks for reading and for the review!!!

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