Reviews for The Beginning of Truth
s50m | 2013.06.21 - 08:28PM | 26: The Flight | Signed |
Aah! Now they will have to save Harry (and waste that delicious breakfast)! Please update soon! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is up! |
s50m | 2013.06.20 - 08:28PM | 25: Options | Signed |
This was a very riveting chapter! :) The dialogue was perfect for each of the characters. I enjoyed seeing Ron being more thoughtful during their heated discussion about their upcoming plans to destroy the Horcruxes. Also, the ending was a sweet treat! I'm glad that Severus has decided that "option 2" isn't a viable choice anymore. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, s50m! Things are heating up indeed--and not just between Severus and Hermione! Thanks for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it! |
Jong_Kahn | 2013.06.05 - 02:20AM | 25: Options | Signed |
My favorite sentence in this chapter: "She would be the death of him, Severus was sure, but if more of that was in store, he had already decided that he would happily die." Hell, yes--a worthy cause, indeed! Excellent chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you found the chapter enjoyable!.Thanks for reading and for the review! |
verasuspense | 2013.06.03 - 12:55PM | 26: The Flight | Signed |
Typo alert: that should be "Where do you think he could have GONE." It is perfectly obvious where Harry has gone. Even Ron would have better sense !
Author's Response: Thanks. |
Jong_Kahn | 2013.04.04 - 02:22AM | 18: The Lull | Signed |
The first time I read this I was so swept up by the action in both segments that I neglected to compliment the drama of the Dark Lord's entrance. Loved the way the fire completely went out--then dramatically fired up! Nicely done chapter; thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it! |
Loyd1957 | 2013.03.22 - 03:38PM | 25: Options | Signed |
Well, that was interesting. Their conversation was enlightening. You grasped the naiveness of Hermione greatly. Her emotional rawness to new feelings and the same with Severus. It was very genuine and lovely. I do understand the side of Severus that just can't fathom someone 20 years his junior finding something special in him. Plus, feeling like it is just wrong, but Hermione speaks with such maturity and their commonality is their intelligence. Always works for me!
Author's Response: They seem to have found a common ground in the chaos surrounding them. Both, like you mentioned, deal with this newly developed attachment in entirely different ways. Severus Snape won’t give in that easily, bearing in mind a nightmare was all it took to consider pushing her away. Hermione is truly the naïf, but she’s finally showing some of that renowned Gryffindor bravado when dealing with him. Only time will show who ends up the victor when all is said and done. Thank you for reading and for taking the time to review! |
MsTree | 2013.03.20 - 09:38PM | 25: Options | Signed |
Quite the nightmare he had. The subconscious is such a bear. ^_^
Author's Response: It is indeed. I would imagine Severus fights with his subconscious on a regular basis. The stubborn fool won't allow himself find peace! Thanks for reading! |
s50m | 2013.02.27 - 07:55PM | 24: Plights and Old Friends | Signed |
As Ron would say, that chapter was "bloody brilliant!" :) I love how Hermione and Severus's relationship is progressing - they seem so comfortable with each other. And I'm so glad that Harry has been cured and is ready to get back to business. I can tell that you have spent a ton of time writing and perfecting this story. Keep up the terrific work! :)
Author's Response: I believe you will enjoy the next chapter. Things are about to heat up between our two favorite people. Exactly how they handle each other, however, we'll just have to see. Thank you for taking time out of your day to not only read, but review as well. It means a lot, s50m! |
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