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Reviews for The Beginning of Truth

bralon2012.06.07 - 12:31PM16: Mental MusingsSigned
Another great chapter! Can't wait to see how Hermione's lesson will be! Good jog! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I'm glad you like it!

PILKY2012.06.07 - 04:14AM17: New Truths and Old TiesSigned
You are very talented and this was a truly great chapter. Your characters have real depth

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! I'm glad you like the way I'm slowly ripping them from cannon characterization. I thought they deserved better.

verasuspense2012.06.06 - 11:53PM17: New Truths and Old TiesSigned
Too bad Canon Severus could never let Lily go. As Mad magazine put it "I devoted my life to the memory of a woman who didn't give a damn about me. "

Author's Response: Yeah, it really sucks that he was so love-struck with her. He really screwed himself out of happiness by hanging on to a woman who was clearly not interested, not to mention six feet under.

jenidralph2012.06.06 - 11:21PM17: New Truths and Old TiesSigned
Well, if he doesn't know.. at least he suspects. I'm glad he let Lily go. That's more room for Hermione in his heart. ;)

Author's Response: Oh, I believe he has a pretty good idea. I think he's just trying to figure out what to do with that newfound knowledge. As far as Lily goes, that is a bit of a sore spot for me. I tend to rant when her name is brought up. I have never liked the way Snape clings to her. It kills me that all the love he was capable of showing was wasted on a woman who obviously made her choice. And you're right, that certainly is more room for Hermione in his heart!!!! Thanks for the review!!

s50m2012.06.05 - 03:05PM13: ContrivanceSigned
I hope that Hermione reflects on her conversation with Severus - he just admitted that she had 'womanly charms!' How would he know if he hadn't been looking himself? :)

Author's Response: Of course he looks…and he has looked more than once. Good thing for him though, he is very good at not being caught! Thanks for the review!

s50m2012.06.05 - 03:00PM12: The Beginning of TruthSigned
You've done a terrific job of pacing your story - the action is almost non-stop and even the "talky" scenes are relevant and intense. Kudos to Snape for being almost human to Harry regarding the upsetting revelation he learned in the chapter. And I pity the Death Eaters who are taking on the team of Snape, Potter, Weasley, and Granger! :) I can tell that you've spent a lot of time and effort on your story. Keep up the tremendous work! :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I can honestly say I have put more work into this thing than I did any of my papers for college. My Very worn-down spot on the couch was littered with scrapped drafts of chapters, outlines, and a wild assortment of things that left my living room in a state of complete disarray. I’d like to think it was worth it... Thanks for the review!

s50m2012.06.05 - 02:51PM11: ReunionSigned
That was pretty tense, until Harry and Ron came to the rescue. I'm glad that everyone is getting away unhurt. Excellent work! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!!

s50m2012.06.05 - 02:37PM9: InfiltrationSigned
Very, very exciting! :) I particularly loved this line (said by Snape): “Miss Granger, there comes a time when one should keep their mouth closed. That moment for you was approximately twenty seconds ago." Ha! :)

Author's Response: Ha! Yeah, he can be a bit of a smart butt sometimes. Thanks for the review!

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