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Reviews for Choose Something Like A Star

snape_aholic2012.02.16 - 11:03PM11: Grand FinaleSigned
This was such a heart-warming story. Thank you so much! Keep writing! It felt like I had been reading for 5 mins, and not just sat here reading 11 chapters at once :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for your lovely comment.

Loyd19572012.02.16 - 09:11AM11: Grand FinaleSigned
Okay quit making me cry...just loved this poignant story of love, laughter, heartache and life. Thanks again for another big hit!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it - sorry I made you cry, though ;)

Luthiria2012.02.14 - 02:24AM11: Grand FinaleSigned
I am in tears. Thanks for this great story. :-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind comment.

Nexttosomething2012.02.13 - 12:49AM1: PrologueSigned
I really really enjoyed this fic. The only thing I would say is that the sex in this didn't seem to really match the previously set tone of the story. With the focus on family and forgiveness and acceptance all wrapped up in this beautiful, homey picture you had painted of the Granger household, the almost raunchy depiction of their time between the sheets kind of threw me. Not to say I had any problem with the description or anything (the story was appropriatly rated) but the sweet romance that led to this encounter I thought would resolve in equally sweet love making. It was simply a surprise, nothing more. I really really did love this and I thought it was a very sweet story. I will be reading more of your work. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. In my defense, I can only write from personal experience that, when two people who love and desire one another with great passion, the first time sex can often be a bit dirty and intense, because they have built up such a head of steam, so to speak. Once the initial madness has been assuaged, I think it's a little easier to temper one's passion with romance.Thank you so much for you great review.

Asthart2012.02.12 - 11:46PM11: Grand FinaleSigned
BEAUTIFUL! I really fell in love with your fic, especially since the elements together fascinate me Hermione + Severus + Child = happy ending. At first I was distraught, a violation must be terrible for any being. But I'm so glad the story, I really charm and congratulations on such wonderful work. No more I say goodbye, greetings and encouragement! PD. - Sorry to express my faults, I use the translator.

Author's Response: Thank you. You are so kind to me. Thank you for reading!

Cheryl Grant2012.02.07 - 11:58PM11: Grand FinaleSigned
I LOVED this story!! Wonderfully paced and beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

stickleyhunter2012.02.06 - 01:38AM11: Grand FinaleSigned
Great story. I just wanted to mention a small error in the last chapter. You refer to Severus as her "stepfather" even after you had already stated he had adopted her. This would mean he is not her stepfather, but her father.

Author's Response: Good point!

aliosio2012.02.05 - 12:41AM11: Grand FinaleSigned
Still teary eyed! A great fan fic thanks for writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

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