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| cottontail | 2012.06.14 - 01:22PM | 12: Chapter 11 | Signed |
| You must have read my mind, I signed on to the computer today and the first thing I thought of was how I missed this story and was hoping that you would update soon. You could imagine how happy I was to see an update from you. I love this story and the way her memories are coming back bit by bit. Thank you so much for the update, just please do not make us wait so long for another one. Author's Response: Thanks so much for the sweet review! More is coming very soon (my July was completely hijacked). Can't wait to see what you think! | |||
| Derelict Author | 2012.06.14 - 09:00AM | 12: Chapter 11 | Signed |
| I think your writing seems to be smoothing out as this story continues. It seems a little less wooden (which is awesome), and I'm feeling more depth/characterization [and I might sound like a bitch for saying this, but I can't stand precocious children characters. It's nothing on you... more on my own experience with children ;)]. It's unfortunate that such short chapters come from longer updates, and that her recovering her memory seems far off, but boy, is it a thrill to read the "memory glimmer" scenes. I love them. Author's Response: I'm so glad things are coming together for you here! I know what you mean about 'precocious' children, the little twerps! But I think Hermione is an archetype for that... for better or worse. More soon! | |||
| Lucretia123 | 2012.06.14 - 01:20AM | 12: Chapter 11 | Signed |
| So glad to see an update! The mind is such a fragile thing.....Severus is showing so much patience that I'm glad parts of the "old" Hermione is starting to break through! Author's Response: Thanks! Severus, the man is the epitome of patience in some ways. Patience pays off | |||
| severus49 | 2012.06.14 - 12:05AM | 12: Chapter 11 | Signed |
| So close, so close! I'm glad to see Hermione asserting herself more and more, but it's so frustrating that Gretchen's holding on so tightly! Author's Response: Thanks! This has been quite the ordeal for our heroine! But she's one tough cookie... | |||
| loreen77 | 2012.05.06 - 10:53AM | 11: Chapter 10 | Signed |
| A visit to the shrieking shack could stir a few memories. Author's Response: OH! Would it ever! I think there's enough on the Hogwarts grounds to keep Gretchen occupied for quite some time... :-D | |||
| Leraiv Snape | 2012.05.04 - 09:28AM | 11: Chapter 10 | Signed |
| The boys were fantastic...I don't know that I understand the last piece of the chapter about Hogsmeade, but I suppose that can wait until next update. Well done! Author's Response: Thanks! I think, right now, Sev is just waiting to see what of Hermione comes out of Gretchen's mouth... Thanks for reading/reviewing! | |||
| cottontail | 2012.05.03 - 07:47PM | 11: Chapter 10 | Signed |
| Oh what a great chapter. Buckbeak was certainly able to bring back quite a few memories just as they all had thought. I love the fact that she felt comfortable enough to go up to Rori's bedroom and see what all the laughter was about. Would love another update real soon. Author's Response: Thanks so much! More is on the way, of course! Gretchen is really settling in with the Snapes, much to everyone's delight... Thanks for reading/reviewing! | |||
| severus49 | 2012.05.03 - 02:45PM | 11: Chapter 10 | Signed |
| I wonder if it's part of the - should we say "curse" - that makes Hermione not see the runes? Author's Response: Oh, I'm sure Severus would like to know! Now, to just figure out what those runes are saying... | |||
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