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Reviews for Vitae Explicare Memento

severus492012.08.04 - 12:22PM13: Chapter 12Signed
It seems like Albus hit the nail on the head, didn't he? And it seems Severus didn't want to even admit it - even to himself. Albus is right, Hermione needs a big gesture from Severus, or at least enough intimacy from him in order for her to respond for a long enough time. Hermione doesn't really have a reason to do anything other than remember as long as he's not making her feel like she's an integral part of his life and the marriage. I hope Severus rectifies that soon for Rori's sake!

Author's Response: That's Albus for you, right? That needle-like insight, prodding you closer to something you don't necessarily want to acknowledge :-D And I definitely think Sev has a bit of martyr syndrome when it comes to his love life, you know?

vze57t9j2012.08.04 - 04:18AM13: Chapter 12Signed
Yay! More memories and more bridges back to Hermione! I loved this chapter. Poor Hagrid! His rump is gonna be sore after this visit. Well done! :D

Author's Response: Yes! Although, I think Hagrid has a thick hide around that gooey center of his... :-D

Jong_Kahn2012.08.04 - 03:01AM13: Chapter 12Signed
I like the way you're weaving this all together, both in Hermione's mind, and in the story itself. Very nice job, thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's definitely something like weaving to unweave just to weave it all up again. Glad you like it!

Lucretia1232012.08.04 - 01:44AM13: Chapter 12Signed
Thank you for the update! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: More is coming! just slowly... thanks for sticking with me!

jillbrim2012.07.10 - 03:16PM1: PrologueSigned
I so enjoy your story. I typically don't read fan fiction that introduces non- cannon characters, however your Rori and Gretchen are well thought out and plausible within the Harry Potter universe. Thank you for your entertaining story.

Author's Response: Thanks! I know what you mean about original characters, they are (oddly) one of my turn-offs too. However, I wanted to twist the 'Hermione's got a baby and they save Severus' theme and see if what is good for the gander could also be good for the goose! Glad you are enjoying so far!

vze57t9j2012.06.26 - 04:02AM12: Chapter 11Signed
Wowie! What an action packed day! Excellent chapter. The tension and frustration has increased so much in the story that it is bittersweet to read and almost palpable. I'm so glad that Hermione is poking through more and more. Well done!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! The longer she stays in this world, the more she'll find what she's been looking for, for better or worse.

loreen772012.06.15 - 08:09PM12: Chapter 11Signed
Wonderful development, but how frustrated gretchen must be.....

Author's Response: Yes! To get close and then find there's so much more...

MsTree2012.06.14 - 07:12PM12: Chapter 11Signed
Sounds like there might have been a breakthrough here. ^_^

Author's Response: Yes! We are getting someplace, finally!

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