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Reviews for Vitae Explicare Memento

Derelict Author2012.01.30 - 04:06PM5: Chapter 4Signed
I had almost forgotten about this story! While the language seems a bit wooden at times, your scene between Ron and Hermione nearly stole my breath away... so I will continue reading and await the next chapter!

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad I've got my hooks into you! I hope that, as Gretchen's world opens up, you find more and more breath-taking scenes!

loreen772012.01.25 - 09:54PM5: Chapter 4Signed
I can not wait to see how she responds to Rori. I enjoy this story a lot and look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks! More (including Rori!) will be up soon!

verasuspense2012.01.23 - 02:28PM5: Chapter 4Signed
So Hermione is still in there somewhere. I hope Severus' plan works, otherwise his daughter is going to wind up traumatized.

Author's Response: yes! and Severus has a few tricks up his sleeve to keep his little girl safe, I'm sure...

OzRatbag22012.01.11 - 10:04PM4: Chapter 3Signed
This is such an interesting start to what promises to be a fabulous story. :) I really like the idea of Hermione, though more powerful than Lilly, was unable to do more than be transported away from the scene devoid of her memories and emotions. Severus' shock, his brooding and his love for Rori shine through, and each character has been well rounded yet not perfect. harry's bumbling shock is very real - he's startled and it must have been very odd for him to introduce himself to one of his closest friends. That all comes through so well! As much as this is hurt/comfort and a healthy dose of mystery (which I adore), I really think this story is turning into a true character study, full of all the twists and turns that occur when life happens. It's a long time since a story grabbed me by the scruff of the neck and dragged me headlong into the magic of it - as trite as that sounds. I'm really intrigued and looking forward to seeing just how you resolve Gretchen's issues and peel away the coccoon protecting Hermione's memories.

Author's Response: Wow, what a great review! Thank you so, so much! I adore marriage law fics, and fics where some (not so-)darling babe comes in and cracks Sev open like cheap pinata, but I'd never seen one where he got the child. It's proved to be a challenge, but I'm really enjoying the process (even when I'm banging my head against the wall!). More will be up very soon! Can't wait to see what you think!

Shiv54682012.01.11 - 05:55PM4: Chapter 3Signed
Ooh this is all intriguing.

Author's Response: Thanks!

loreen772012.01.10 - 07:31PM4: Chapter 3Signed
Yeah, can not wait to find out what she sees. Great story.

Author's Response: Thanks! They weren't married long, but... :-D

Jong_Kahn2012.01.09 - 11:37PM4: Chapter 3Signed
So...how old are Hermione, Severus and their daughter supposed to be now? Is Riya entering--or graduating from--Hogwarts soon? This is so intriguing and frustrating. Thanks for all of your work; it's good.

Author's Response: Rori just turned 10 so Gretchen is 28 and Sev is *cough.mumble.coughcough*. Glad you are into it! more soon.

OzRatbag22012.01.09 - 11:13PM1: PrologueSigned
For all the years that the MLC fics have existed, this is - to the best of my knowledge - the only one to take it from that angle. Intriguing, beautifully written and you've got me hooked! :) I'm looking forward to watching the story unravel and snare my curiosity even more.

Author's Response: Thanks! I've read (and loved) a lot of marriage law fics (and HG with a kid!fics) and I wanted to try something new.... I'm glad you're interested! This has proved to be quite a challenge, and it's so rewarding that you're into it! More very soon!

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