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Reviews for Vitae Explicare Memento

Jong_Kahn2012.02.20 - 01:13AM7: Chapter 6Signed
Hermione didn't fall unconscious until she'd gripped that final staff and taken Rori's hand as well. So presumably, she does remember what came before that. For how long was she unconscious? And poor little Rori, for having to feel it's all her fault, when of course it's not, and poor Hermione and poor Severus. I do hope things will be looking up before too much longer. Excellent chapter. Thanks for all your work.

Author's Response: You're right, everything up until then, she knows. And now that they've been to Ollivander's... well, everyone's learned quite a bit, to say the least. Thanks for reviewing!

MsTree2012.02.19 - 09:31PM7: Chapter 6Signed
So, in essence, Gretchen forgot everything that had happened over the last day and a half, including Diagon Alley? Boy, talk about one step forward and two steps back. ^_^

Author's Response: :-D I think not so much is lost as it seems in these wee small hours... Thanks for reviewing!

loreen772012.02.15 - 03:50PM6: Chapter 5Signed
This story is hauntingly beautiful and lovely. Rori is amazing for her age. 10++

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Writing Rori is a bit of a trick, I'm glad you like her!

Elou2012.02.14 - 04:11PM6: Chapter 5Signed
I do love how this is unfolding. I have a thrumming excitement as I read. It is wonderful. Very emotional. I myself have my own Rory, and she is a tad younger than "your" Rori, but just a cherished as your written one is. I look forward to the unwinding of her mind. Thank you for sharing~Elou

Author's Response: Aw... Rories are great! What a special chord to strike here! I'm glad you are enjoying this so much! more soon

Jong_Kahn2012.02.14 - 12:29AM6: Chapter 5Signed
That chapter was well worth waiting for, though I would be happy to have one appear sooner! Seriously, I'm glad another exceptional Legilimens like Albus is on hand to help break Hermione out of being Gretchen. I loved Rori's interactions with Gretchen; I felt both characters were believable and acted as naturally as they could in such a hard-to-deal-with situation. Well done, and thanks for all your work!

Author's Response: Thanks! Having Albus around will be very useful, as long as he doesn't give Severus any more big surprises... More with Rori and Gretchen is on the way! :-D

MsTree2012.02.13 - 04:26PM6: Chapter 5Signed
I WANT that bedroom! *grin* Such a satisfying chapter. And off to Ollivander's we go. ^_^

Author's Response: I know! Rori's a lucky duck! I'm glad you like it, more soon!

Maria2012.02.06 - 02:37AM5: Chapter 4Signed
How intriguing! Excellent story so far.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Lucretia1232012.02.03 - 12:20PM1: PrologueSigned
Thank you for a wonderful story! I am definitely waiting for the next installments!

Author's Response: Thanks! More is coming soon!

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