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Leraiv Snape2011.11.18 - 04:19PM1: Signed
You started with an interesting idea, but I confess to struggling with the characterizations. Sirius Black and Lucius Malfoy as professors at Hogwarts? Riddle as Headmaster? While the idea of Tom Riddle becoming Hogwarts' Headmaster is intriguing, how did it happen? Do we ever get to learn why Dumbledore had a change of heart about allowing him back to school? I hope that and more will be addressed in the following chapters. Keep going!

Author's Response: All should be explained in the next few chapters. I do hope you continue to read and enjoy FP.

Haystacks2011.11.14 - 06:11PM1: Signed
Brilliant! I can't wait to see where this goes. It has so much potential....I hope there is more of this.

Author's Response: Another chapter for your reading pleasure. I hope the story continues to please! Thanks for reviewing!

paddiew2011.11.14 - 08:47AM1: Signed
Love it!! Can't wait to see how everyone else has changed and who is the 'evil' person who must be beaten. You must have a conflict planned somewhere. Thank you

Author's Response: Another chapter for your reading pleasure. Conflict will be forthcoming. I hope the story continues to please.

verasuspense2011.11.12 - 02:21PM1: Signed
I see Sirius hasn't changed, AU or not. Send Severus to an orphanage ! A pox on the very idea. Since he is clearly a Hogwarts student, albeit from a Hogwarts in a different timestream, the school has a responsiblity to see to his well-being. Although from the looks of it so far, sending him home might be a worse option than keeping him: this AU seems to be a better place.

Author's Response: I've never liked Sirius, so this is my revenge. I'm glad you're enjoying my story.

Rosmerta2011.11.12 - 12:57AM1: Signed
I just found this story and read all four first chapters - a very interesting beginning! I'd love it if Severus developed friendships with the Golden Trio, though that might be too much to hope for. But with Riddle now apparently on the good side, where is the threat to the Wizarding World? I'll be curious to see how you develop this...Thanks for sharing your work with us!

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the story! I can't answer any of your questions without giving stuff away, so I'll just say "Stay tuned".

Gomes2011.11.11 - 10:37PM1: Signed
Great continuation! I'm really liking how you are fleshing out everyone's personalities in this somewhat-topsy-turvy world that you have created! :) Looking forward to seeing Severus interact with the other students! Thanks so much for sharing this - great work! ♥♥

Author's Response: This story was inspired by one of those "what would have happened if..." moments. Everything else followed from that. Glad you're enjoying the tale!

Aflibble2011.11.11 - 05:24PM1: Signed
oh lovely I want more now. I look forward to seeing what is going to happen next.

Author's Response: I promise all kinds of interesting things to come. Thanks for reviewing!




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