Reviews for An Unexpected Gift
| greenwood | 2011.11.13 - 09:11PM | 1: Back From The Dead | Signed |
| Very nicely blended movie/book and creative changes that make sense. The chapter is well written and really keeps the characters in cannon. I like how you have written Ron. You didn't have to do much but he comes across loud and clear as Ron! |
| Sampdoria | 2011.11.13 - 08:55AM | 2: Coming To Terms | Signed |
| I really like this story so far, I look forward to read more. I am extremely allergic to the Hermione/ Ron pairing so I will close my eyes and jump past any mentioning of them still being together so if I don't comment on any part containing the two of them, you now know the reason:-)) |
| MsTree | 2011.11.12 - 07:35PM | 2: Coming To Terms | Signed |
| Treat Snape like a child? Gasp! What's next? Ron acting mature? *grin* Can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work. ^_^ |
| immortalbliss | 2011.11.12 - 07:04PM | 2: Coming To Terms | Signed |
| I like it.. Looking forward to the next chapter.. |
| Aflibble | 2011.11.12 - 12:39AM | 2: Coming To Terms | Signed |
| I always love a good battle of wills between Hermione and Severus. wonderful so far. I look forward to what is to come. |
| Gomes | 2011.11.04 - 01:09PM | 1: Back From The Dead | Signed |
| (Sorry, the previous review was actually intended for another story, but I will amend by posting my review NOW of yours, lol!)
I really like your premise and am looking forward to seeing where you are taking this. While I'm not a fan of Lily in general, I believe her presence is definitely necessary. Something is brewing, and Hermione's concern (and perhaps something more) for Severus is both touching and what ~he~ needs.
Hopefully Ron's presence as "significant other" will fade, and that in some way and form, Severus and Hermione can find each other. :)
Thanks for sharing - looking forward to the next chapter! ♥ |
| Gomes | 2011.11.04 - 01:05PM | 1: Back From The Dead | Signed |
| Wonderful! You've set a beautiful pace, and the development between Severus and Hermione has been beautifully orchestrated. I love that you have taken your time, that you have let them ~grow~ together. Hermione's psychological evolution is well mapped out, giving her actions and reactions a ~purpose~, which you don't see often. The fact that you aren't manipulating these characters, but instead just letting them be themselves in a given situation, makes my toes curl with delight. I'm ~desperately~ looking forward to reading more - please hurry! :) Thanks so much for sharing this! ♥ |
| immortalbliss | 2011.10.30 - 06:37PM | 1: Back From The Dead | Signed |
| Umm, I know you said there would be RW/HG in the beginning but can we keep the kissing to a minimun?! I actually went "eww".. Lol..
Other than that, I can't wait for the next chapter! |
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