Reviews for Trick or Treat
DRoy234282 | 2019.10.16 - 10:02PM | 1: One-shot | Signed |
This was simply lovely! A flustered Snape and a holder of hopeful dreams, their coming together was destined. Thank you for creating such a beautiful story. |
tialangela | 2019.09.19 - 01:38PM | 1: One-shot | Signed |
Oh, Very good! Short and sweet! |
Dkroy416 | 2016.07.18 - 01:31AM | 1: One-shot | Signed |
Retirement can be good sometimes, especially when your mind has time to come up with something as lovely as this story. Thanks for putting a smile on this old girl's face tonight.
Author's Response: Wow! A new review after all this time! The last one of those I had on this particular story was back in 2011 so I'm delighted to think this is still being read!! Thank you so much! :-) I'm afraid I don't have anything to do with the world of fanfic these days and haven't done for some years now but it was great at the time! Thanks again for your review :-) |
Prospera | 2011.11.16 - 03:36PM | 1: One-shot | Signed |
Very nice story! If I might suggest an edit: "
No one could deny that Miss Granger was anything but beautiful now." I think you want 'suggest' instead of "deny," to avoid the double negative; as written the sentence means she wasn't beautiful, which is obviously not the point.. Probably a cut-and-paste error from a previous version, but worth the edit if they'll let you fix it!
Author's Response: This sentence escaped not only me but my beta reader and the admins aswell, so I definitely feel the 'treat' should be awarded to you for your observation! You are absolutely right - it is indeed a double negative - I shall set about retifying it and thank you for pointing it out &, of course, for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed the story :-) |
vze57t9j | 2011.10.26 - 04:02AM | 1: One-shot | Signed |
Excellent piece of work!!! This was a lovely read. Well done!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you SO very much - I'm really glad you enjoyed my little one-shot! :-) |
joots | 2011.10.24 - 10:55PM | 1: One-shot | Signed |
That was very cute!
Author's Response: Thanks, joots - so glad you enjoyed it! :-) |
SandyKinns | 2011.10.22 - 11:00PM | 1: One-shot | Signed |
Very nice, thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm really glad you enjoyed my little one-shot :-) |
zackley | 2011.10.22 - 10:48PM | 1: One-shot | Signed |
What a wonderful little treat to read! I hope you do write a follow up to see how our favorite pair is faring at Christmas - Maybe for all the major holidays till next Halloween! ;)
Author's Response: Haha! I'm not sure about all the holidays, zackley, but I think I'm going to give a follow-up to this a go sometime! Thank you so much for reviewing :-) |
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