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Reviews for Mindless Bliss

DragonIris2019.08.14 - 10:24PM1: 1Signed
Original, well written, dark, and sweet. Impressive. Thanks for sharing.

Horserider2013.01.10 - 10:08PM1: 1Signed
Ths one needs a sequel...would LOVE to know if she ever has to use it! Good reason for Bellatrix to be such a nut!

Author's Response: God, I know! Seriously, it's on my 'to do' list for this year. Thank you for the lovely review, Horserider!

moor2012.08.05 - 12:00AM1: 1Signed
Argh! So tempted & wanting to read more!

Author's Response: I'm working on it... eventually. Maybe. Somewhere in my brain? LOL Thank you!

Toblass2012.04.23 - 10:07AM1: 1Signed
Aaack! I got so sucked into their *cough*conversation*cough* that I forgot by the end it was a one-shot. I would love to read the sequel...they need to finish this properly indeed! Well done!

Author's Response: That's good, right? LOL The sequel always pings around in my head, but nothing has materialized. Thank you, though, for the wonderful review, love! *hugs*

KnightOfCydonia2011.12.24 - 12:08PM1: 1Signed
Amazing! I hope to read another chapter... Sorry for my English. Cri (Italy)

Author's Response: I'm very sorry, Knight of Cydonia, but this is the only chapter for this story. The story is complete. Thank you for the great review!

Horserider2011.11.08 - 10:34PM1: 1Signed
Would love a follow-up for what comes after! Good original idea! Dark, angsty and yet hopeful!

Author's Response: Sorry, I didn't see this before! EEP! I will at some point work on a sequel (too many sequels are piling up on my desk!) I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for the lovely review!

Inspire2011.10.23 - 09:34PM1: 1Signed
Thanks, I missed the completed tag. I'll feel free to imagine how she might go about getting him back on my own from your intriguing one-shot.

Inspire2011.10.23 - 08:24PM1: 1Signed
Interesting start. I'm curious to see what you do with this. I thought the idea of Voldemort experimenting with his DEs to be intriguing. Even if it does muck with the canon timeline, it's easy to set aside for the sake of the story. On a more technical note, you might want to look up where the hymen is located on a woman's body to fix the physical placement error in the first chapter. It's not uncommon among writers to get it wrong, and you're certainly not alone in mistakenly placing the hymen inside the vagina.

Author's Response: I know that the hymen surrounds the external vaginal opening. However, my wordage may have led you to believe otherwise. I have since corrected the phrasing and hopefully will be a little clearer with regards to anatomy. Also, this is not a 'first chapter', but a one-shot that was brought about by a request on Conenvy two years ago. Thank you for pointing out the muddled description and for the review.

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