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Reviews for Wrong Bettor

Jong_Kahn2015.05.18 - 03:26AM10: Epilogue: Right BettorSigned
Okay, I just read your definition of "Wrong Bettor" in the story outline at the very beginning. I hadn't seen that, so have corrected myself now, so you don't have to do that!

Jong_Kahn2015.05.18 - 03:18AM10: Epilogue: Right BettorSigned
I enjoyed this story a lot. I'm still not sure what the difference is between a "Wrong" and a "Right" Bettor is, nor what that (and all the dice-rolling terms and descriptions) have to do with your story. Aside from the fanfic story you were inspired by, I mean. I was beginning to thing that Violet was playing with dice, and that figured in the mix. But no, it was her wish magic. I do enjoy multiple-version (of characters) stories. One very excellent one is at Potions and Snitches by an author named Malora, which features multiple Sevs and Harrys--and even a Lily in one reality. I'll come back with the title, since I can't remember it offhand, and will lose this review if I try to look it up now. But thank God for Random, because I was able to finish this wonderful story! Thank you for all your hard work--and your betas, too!

Jong_Kahn2015.05.18 - 02:48AM8: Chapter Seven: Fools, Wearing Their Hearts On Their SleevesSigned
I keep wondering how I missed all these subsequent chapters three years ago. I can only guess there must have been multiple stories updated at once, and this story got lost in the crowd at the time.

Jong_Kahn2015.05.18 - 02:33AM7: Chapter Six: Give Me a ReasonSigned
Good to know that H273 is in on it, too! And now S273 (our hero!) knows she wants him, they can..finally proceed!

Jong_Kahn2015.05.18 - 02:05AM6: Chapter Five: A Not-So-Silly Not-So-Little GirlSigned
Hm. I haven't read the StarTrek fanfiction or writer you noted at the beginning. And (no offense intended), but I've found the A/Ns at the ends of chapters about rolling the dice kind of boring and beside the point. That is, until it occurred to me that that is gambling, and the title 'Wrong Bettor' is also gambling related--which therefore must have something to do with all the Ss and Hs and time traveling! Still haven't figured out how, though...

Jong_Kahn2015.05.18 - 01:45AM5: Chapter Four: A Book Is Not A MindSigned
Personally, I'd go more for a Harry-Sev-Hermione marriage than a Ron-combo, but I understand why you went with what was closer to canon. This is a wonderful story, and I remember having come this far before, chapter-wise. I'm so glad I found this again!

Jong_Kahn2015.05.18 - 01:14AM4: Chapter Three: The Usual Rules Don’t ApplySigned
Wow. Three and a half years since I was first reading this marvelous tale. I'm so glad I found it again. (Thank you, Random!) I'll have to Favorite it--only I may have already (in a twist sort of like this story)!

minzdose2012.11.28 - 10:54AM10: Epilogue: Right BettorSigned
imcredible story, i loved the way you made me think. great and novel approach. Hope to read lots more from you....

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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