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Reviews for Fruit Of A Bitter Harvest

SerafineSnape2011.10.14 - 10:00PM2: TwoSigned
Wow. One step forward, one step back. Loving this story. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: As all dances go, SerafineSnape, they are nothing without the back and fore flow. Thanks for reviewing. Hope you enjoy the rest. S

greenwood2011.10.14 - 08:59PM2: TwoSigned
Oh I loved this chapter too. You can really tell how they are struggling to survive this union (it seems more her than him however) and yet there are glimmers of caring from Severus to Hermione. I keep thinking back to the first chapter and fear that the paper Severus has just signed is their divorce paper.

Author's Response: Thank you greenwood, but, to use an American phrase, I will have to take the fifth on what might have been signed. I wanted very much to show a relationship that was not quick and not easy given the fact that neither of the two people in it wanted it. Thanks for the review they help keep me scribbling.

onegirl2011.10.14 - 07:10PM2: TwoSigned
I enjoy your story. It is a new and interesting take on the much used MLC. Your style is great and you create nice tension and atmosphere. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Hi onegirl, thank you for saying that it is a new take, believe me it was a long time in writing and re- writing and re-writing the re-writing. I hope you will enjoy the rest. The next part is in the queue. Thanks for hitting the review button.S

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