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Reviews for Bystander

Maria2012.04.19 - 02:24AM1: OneSigned
*whistles and claps* Excellent!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

stgulik2012.01.17 - 11:10PM1: OneSigned
I should have commented on this one before. I liked this one so much for its tempo and its characterization. The tone of voice sounded so much like Remus I wasn't surprised it wound up being him!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm pretty fond of this one as well. After writing so much dark stuff, a little fluff was definitely in order. Remus is my second favorite male character... without the influence of the Marauders, I could see him being a friend to Severus.

loreen772011.10.18 - 06:04AM1: OneSigned
Very cute.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

greenwood2011.10.11 - 08:51PM1: OneSigned
Very nice indeed! I really enjoyed finding out our "onlooker" at the end. I kept wondering who it was once I found out it was a male. I rather hated finding out in cannon that Ramus and Tonks had died so I like your version of an ending better. Very nicely written with just the right amount of warmth against the image of cold snow.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was getting into the winter season a bit early, I think, but I couldn't help it. After Snape, I was most sad about Remus as well. I always thought that if Snape would have had a friend, it could have been Remus.

Stella Hope Stargazer2011.10.11 - 11:29AM1: OneSigned
I found this lovely and charming, but not too sweet. I liked the way Hermione would approach Severus as if he were a wild animal who might flee (or bite her) if she were too abrupt. (I also liked the very appropriate quote from "Love Actually").

Author's Response: Oh, yes... who doesn't like 'Love, Actually'? Hehe... I agree with your take on Severus; I see him as an extremely tense person, almost like a high-strung horse that will bolt at the slightest provocation, and all he needs it a gentle yet firm hand. Thanks so much!

WnL6242011.10.10 - 11:57AM1: OneSigned
Lovely, thank you! A bit surprised it was Remus, though.

Author's Response: You're very welcome, and I'm glad I could suprise you. :) Thanks for reading!

sqHPfan2011.10.10 - 11:50AM1: OneSigned
just lovely!!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Silvermage2011.10.10 - 06:29AM1: OneSigned
Perfect, gave me a warm feeling inside on a cold autumn day!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Here's to warm fuzzies!

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