Reviews for Bystander
Maria | 2012.04.19 - 02:24AM | 1: One | Signed |
*whistles and claps* Excellent!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! |
stgulik | 2012.01.17 - 11:10PM | 1: One | Signed |
I should have commented on this one before. I liked this one so much for its tempo and its characterization. The tone of voice sounded so much like Remus I wasn't surprised it wound up being him!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm pretty fond of this one as well. After writing so much dark stuff, a little fluff was definitely in order. Remus is my second favorite male character... without the influence of the Marauders, I could see him being a friend to Severus. |
loreen77 | 2011.10.18 - 06:04AM | 1: One | Signed |
Very cute.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! |
greenwood | 2011.10.11 - 08:51PM | 1: One | Signed |
Very nice indeed! I really enjoyed finding out our "onlooker" at the end. I kept wondering who it was once I found out it was a male. I rather hated finding out in cannon that Ramus and Tonks had died so I like your version of an ending better. Very nicely written with just the right amount of warmth against the image of cold snow.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I was getting into the winter season a bit early, I think, but I couldn't help it. After Snape, I was most sad about Remus as well. I always thought that if Snape would have had a friend, it could have been Remus. |
Stella Hope Stargazer | 2011.10.11 - 11:29AM | 1: One | Signed |
I found this lovely and charming, but not too sweet. I liked the way Hermione would approach Severus as if he were a wild animal who might flee (or bite her) if she were too abrupt. (I also liked the very appropriate quote from "Love Actually").
Author's Response: Oh, yes... who doesn't like 'Love, Actually'? Hehe... I agree with your take on Severus; I see him as an extremely tense person, almost like a high-strung horse that will bolt at the slightest provocation, and all he needs it a gentle yet firm hand. Thanks so much! |
WnL624 | 2011.10.10 - 11:57AM | 1: One | Signed |
Lovely, thank you! A bit surprised it was Remus, though.
Author's Response: You're very welcome, and I'm glad I could suprise you. :) Thanks for reading! |
sqHPfan | 2011.10.10 - 11:50AM | 1: One | Signed |
just lovely!!
Author's Response: Thank you! |
Silvermage | 2011.10.10 - 06:29AM | 1: One | Signed |
Perfect, gave me a warm feeling inside on a cold autumn day!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Here's to warm fuzzies! |
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