Reviews for Forged in Flames
| magicalpresence | 2011.10.30 - 10:35AM | 12: Chapter 12 | Signed |
| Dear me, he sounds like he needs a good sleep. |
| crownglass39 | 2011.10.30 - 10:22AM | 13: Chapter 13 | Signed |
| I love that Hermione is gaining strength through their interactions, as her conversation with Ron proves. It contrasts nicely with Snape being able to relax his defenses around her a bit. Lovely chapter! |
| Jong_Kahn | 2011.10.29 - 11:34PM | 13: Chapter 13 | Signed |
| I like the way she'd put Ron in his place. When even Harry notices it's time to shut up, and Ron still hasn't noticed--! I'm glad Snape gave the class a kind of rest so that she didn't have to worry about Ron being an ass. Good set of chapters. Thanks for all your work! |
| little_rose | 2011.10.29 - 08:52PM | 13: Chapter 13 | Signed |
| Oh maaan! This is good,this is so good! I love the way you are ratcheting up the tension between them, knot by knot. And how, we as readers, are able to see them in their own minds, feeling it even more, but living their outside personas, still. Yes! Keep it coming:) |
| little_rose | 2011.10.29 - 08:52PM | 13: Chapter 13 | Signed |
| Oh maaan! This is good,this is so good! I love the way you are ratcheting up the tension between them, knot by knot. And how, we as readers, are able to see them in their own minds, feeling it even more, but living their outside personas, still. Yes! Keep it coming:) |
| Jong_Kahn | 2011.10.29 - 03:25AM | 10: Chapter 10 | Signed |
| What a concept; what a development--wow! Wonderful chapter! Thanks for writing it. |
| Shizuka | 2011.10.28 - 11:40PM | 10: Chapter 10 | Signed |
| This is my ABSOLUTE favorite chapter! You (AND Hermione!) have outdone yourselves! This is SO. INTERESTING. And I like that you do two chapters at once. I'll be re-reading this one for a while. |
| magicalpresence | 2011.10.27 - 09:30PM | 11: Chapter 11 | Signed |
What happens if LV himself casts Finite Incantatem - or somebody else in the vicinity? Or does it only work with Severus/Hermione?
Author's Response: An interesting question! Perhaps Severus is wondering that himself... |
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