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| Jong_Kahn | 2022.02.02 - 11:19PM | 29: Chapter 29 | Signed |
| Good story, well written. Thanks for all your hard work. Another "10" for you! | |||
| Jong_Kahn | 2022.02.02 - 09:06PM | 19: Chapter 19 | Signed |
| A little over 10 years later, I'm rereading this story, and enjoying it just as much as the first time. (And it having been so long, and having read dozens, if not hundreds of other fanfics in the meantime, I don't remember it--so it's a new story to me!) I love these lines, about Snape being able to surgically remove only part of her memory by Obliviation: "...most wizards would say that Obliviation to that degree of precision was impossible. But he wasn't most wizards." Indeed! | |||
| startbynature | 2021.03.25 - 09:30AM | 29: Chapter 29 | Signed |
| Love coming back to the fandom and finding gems like these ! It’s very well written, your workmanship is among the best I have read in this ship. It screams “a proper writer!” Well done | |||
| startbynature | 2021.03.25 - 05:54AM | 29: Chapter 29 | Signed |
| Love coming back to the fandom and finding gems like these ! It’s very well written, your workmanship is among the best I have read in this ship. It screams “a proper writer!” Well done | |||
| Ive | 2020.09.13 - 06:37PM | 29: Chapter 29 | Signed |
| I couldn't put this down! I'll be thinking about it for days. I think you've really mastered this one.
I appreciated Snape's characterisation here. I feltthat he was as callous as we know him to be, and that you didn't just toss the two into bed together, even after a sexual encounter. I thought that Hermione's endurance under Cruciatus was nearly superhuman, but then again, she's very resilient in canon, so it wasn't impossible. I thought your suspension potion idea was original and felt possible, and I loved having Hermione strike that killing blow! My favorite part of this story was the emotions you showed us. This is something that I think can easily get lost in lust or in sappy, fluffy love, and you showed how complex this story was. All in all, excellent work. | |||
| DistinctVagueness | 2019.11.27 - 08:27AM | 29: Chapter 29 | Signed |
| I didn't see this story when it was first published, but I came across it when searching for something new, and read it over the last couple of days. You have an excellent talent for building tension between characters. I was hanging onto every word of the scene from the Yule Ball, and that's unusual. Yes, there was a familiar trope of Hermione's first time being wonderful, but, there was a harsh energy running through that scene that did not make it unbelievable. I particularly enjoyed your characterisation of Snape. It is sometimes not easy to keep him hard and cold throughout, but he felt very real. I think you did a wonderful job with this story, and I loved the inventiveness of the suspended particles in a potion. Very interesting idea. I notice you have written again fairly recently, and I will read that too soon. But if you ever felt compelled to write some sort of follow-up to this, I think it would be very well-received. There's all sorts of questions to be answered, particularly the issue of Voldemort's soul. I would hope that they would try to combat this problem in some way. It would also be good to view the fallout from Hermione and Snape's relationship, when the secrecy falls away and they're no longer bound by their plot. Anyway, thank you again for writing, I immensely enjoyed this story. -DV | |||
| DistinctVagueness | 2019.11.27 - 08:04AM | 24: Chapter 24 | Signed |
| This is fantastically written scene, and I've read enough SS/HG first times over the years to know a good one when I read it. Even the lead-up to the ultimate part of this chapter was visual, energetic and heart-racing - and most importantly, hot. I know this isn't a new story, but I didn't come across it previously. I will review when I finish, but I did want to applaud you for how brilliant this chapter was. -DV | |||
| greysky8 | 2019.02.08 - 01:25PM | 23: Chapter 23 | Signed |
| Now he's mad about her JEWELRY?! Pretty childish. She should cross him off her list. RIGHT AWAY. | |||
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