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| longroot | 2011.10.08 - 12:24AM | 1: One | Signed |
| Very eloquent prose, and a promising start for a story. I look forward to reading more. Author's Response: Hi longroot, Thank you very much for the review. The next part will hopefully be up soon, it is in the queue. | |||
| Maria | 2011.10.03 - 06:16PM | 1: One | Signed |
| Excellent. A good take on the MLC. And major kudos for the way you have Snape try to comfort her. Very IC in a post-Voldy world. I look forward to more. Author's Response: Hi Maria, Thank you very much for the review. I must admit that Snape's attempt at comforting was my favourite bit of that scene. The next chapter is with the admins now, so fingers crossed it should be up soon. S | |||
| borednow | 2011.10.03 - 11:04AM | 1: One | Signed |
| Hmm, I am very interested in what this story has in store. I always enjoy a good MLC, and I especially love the ones with some good build-up. Always hate when the story starts out with Hermione having some romantic delusions or something, so I think this will probably be my cup of tea, considering the angst. Also, you write very well. Thank you for that! Author's Response: Hi borednow, I wanted to start from the point of neither of them knowing the other beyond what they knew already. I hope it will continue to please your teacup and you. Thanks for the review as you know they are lovely to receive. | |||
| zackley | 2011.10.01 - 03:54PM | 1: One | Signed |
| A great fresh take on the marriage law. I really enjoy your writing style. And like a previous reviewer stated, you pack a lot of good detail in a short chapter. Looking forward to next week! Author's Response: Hi zacley, glad you think so, the bones of the story went through about five stages of evolution. I am hoping to submit the next part tonight, if I get time. Thanks for the lovely review.S | |||
| KellyJoy | 2011.09.28 - 09:03PM | 1: One | Signed |
| Excellent angst. Normally short chapters leave me unsatisfied, but not here. You've managed to convey so much despite the economy of words. I'll be looking forward to the next update. Author's Response: Hi KellyJoy, Thank you for the lovely review. I guess my one shot style has spilled over into anything longer I write! Next update should be next week. | |||
| MsTree | 2011.09.28 - 08:53PM | 1: One | Signed |
| Interesting take on the marriage law. Looking forward to reading upcoming chapters. ^_^ Author's Response: Hi MsTree, I hope you will enjoy them. Thanks for the review. :) | |||
| severus49 | 2011.09.28 - 02:00PM | 1: One | Signed |
| Ugh. For both of them to not even try to connect on any other level is a defeat of a much larger scale. It's like the war took all the wind out of their sails when it comes to fighting for any normalcy ever again. Author's Response: Hi severus49, Yes they are both reeling from the shock, but at the moment Ii think their way of dealing with the elephant in the room is very much to ignore it. I can promise that their relationship will evolve.Thanks for reviewing. | |||
| Sampdoria | 2011.09.28 - 03:54AM | 1: One | Signed |
| Intriguing, I look forward to read more. Author's Response: Hi Sampdoria, nice to hear from you again. I will try not to disappoint. | |||
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