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angelbaby69 | 2011.09.06 - 09:59PM | 1: | Signed |
Glad to see the story updated and am looking forward to the next chapter. I like how you have written Severus and Hermione very much in this story.
Author's Response: Thank you. Getting their inner voices right is important to me. |
Maria | 2011.09.05 - 07:50PM | 1: | Signed |
Love it so far. I like your take on SS, looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) The next chapters are with my beta, and chapter four should join the que by the end of this week. I have written it all the way up to chapter 8 though, and still going strong! |
Loyd1957 | 2011.09.05 - 07:36PM | 1: | Signed |
Well I have found another favorite story to savor. They come around so rarely that this is so exciting. I find these stories with the 2 main characters being characterized exactly this way - true to form. Severus, rough, powerful, selfish to a degree and Hermione strong, yet waivering in her strength because of lack of self confidence. This should be very intriguing.
Author's Response: WOO! What an amazing thing to have written about my first ever fiction! Thank you so much. Keeping their characters true to form is so important, not only to make the story more realistic, but also, without those clashes, there would be no angst and it would all get very dull very fast. |
LazzyLizzard | 2011.09.05 - 03:35AM | 1: | Signed |
Poor Hermione, to feel so insecure about something so daunting as her first sexual experience. Thankfully your Severus seems to be understanding of this, perhaps even a little of the 'been there done that' angle. Lord only knows how his first time went, what with his self-esteem. Poor man.
Thank you for sharing, I can't wait for more...
Author's Response: Not that I mind, but did you mean to post this twice? Lol xx |
LazzyLizzard | 2011.09.05 - 03:35AM | 1: | Signed |
Poor Hermione, to feel so insecure about something so daunting as her first sexual experience. Thankfully your Severus seems to be understanding of this, perhaps even a little of the 'been there done that' angle. Lord only knows how his first time went, what with his self-esteem. Poor man.
Thank you for sharing, I can't wait for more...
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed it. I agree with severus's guesses about where her confidence comes from, what with her Canon relationship with Ron vs lavender. You shall have to wait and see I'd severus is able to continue being kind... |
buffyslayer | 2011.09.04 - 11:44PM | 1: | Signed |
Thanks for not rushing them into a ceremony that night. the anticipation is nice before that big scene. Cheers!
Author's Response: Can you imagine Molly letting that happen?! I hope you continue to enjoy it. It's written to chapter 9 and they're all with my beta, so update to follow soon |
MsTree | 2011.09.04 - 07:47PM | 1: | Signed |
Okay, this is getting better all the time. It will go into my Favorites list and onto my WiPs list. ^_^
Author's Response: I'm glad to see that I'm starting to pull you in! The real angst and nitty gritty will come in later chapters, but for now, I hope you continue to enjoy it. |
MsTree | 2011.09.04 - 07:35PM | 1: | Signed |
Good chapter. I wouldn't give it an Exceeds Expectations, but it's early days yet. ^_^
Author's Response: OO I like the idea of having chapters graded! What would have improved it? |
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