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curlynappers | 2011.09.15 - 08:17AM | 1: | Signed |
I might have just submitted a weird review on ch 5, but just in case I didn't (as it isn't actually up yet) I wanted to say thank you for posting, I am still enjoying this a lot.
Author's Response: You may have been the lucky recipient of a computer glitch since the 5th chapter isn't up yet! I am glad you are enjoying the story so far. |
curlynappers | 2011.09.15 - 08:15AM | 1: | Signed |
So apparently the fifth chapter has come up while I was reading the fourth. I havent read this one yet, but I am still very entertained by this and I do hope you go on! Thank you for posting!
Author's Response: I have every intention of seeing this through to the end. Hope you continue to enjoy it. |
gurlimargrethe | 2011.09.15 - 04:34AM | 1: | Signed |
am looking very much forward to follow this story,
Author's Response: I am glad. The next chapter will be up soon. |
Sampdoria | 2011.09.15 - 02:47AM | 1: | Signed |
Loved the update, you have a good phase on their relationship/ interaction with eachother considering who they are and the situation they are in, I like it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. It i
Author's Response: Is my aim to develop their relationship as realistically as possible. |
makaem | 2011.09.14 - 10:13PM | 1: | Signed |
Very nice. I like the way they are interacting, a sort of slow stumble like a first date.
Author's Response: What a nice way to put it! Thank you. |
MsTree | 2011.09.14 - 09:12PM | 1: | Signed |
Good chapter. I like the mix of dialogue playing off their uneasiness with each other. Ginny, on the other hand... ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you for your insightful review. God bless Ginny, I think we all have friends like her: they mean well but they always arrive at precisely.the wrong moment LOL |
Maria | 2011.09.14 - 06:44PM | 1: | Signed |
Very good story but I find the dialog rambling. It doesn't flow the way people actually speak. And I just can't buy into the whole Snape-as-a-gentleman thing. Not because of canon-compliance but because in the canon he is very poorly mannered. A man that spits on the ground in front of the whole school is simply uncouth.
Author's Response: I'm sorry you find the dialogue rambling, but the stilted feeling is intentional to highlight the awkwardness of the relationship they share. As for the gentlemanly behaviour, I believe that Severus is just trying to smooth the way for this new situation. |
Sevvy253 | 2011.09.14 - 03:41PM | 1: | Signed |
So nice to read Severus portrayed as a gentleman (without being too gushing, OTT or OOC!) This continues to be good. I'm very much enjoying it :-)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I hate fics that have him as a complete bastard. I mean, just because he doesn't socialize doesn't mean he has poor manners. |
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