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| buffyslayer | 2011.09.20 - 03:27AM | 1: | Signed |
| You've outdone yourself on this chapter. My only complaint is that I'm on the edge of my seat wanting more. Cheers! Author's Response: Thank you for such a lovely review. The next chapter is in the que now for.the admins to check. | |||
| Jong_Kahn | 2011.09.19 - 11:49PM | 1: | Signed |
| Having read the previous chapter's reviews right before this, I was surprised by the strong opinions of the anti-big wedding 'activists', for want of a better phrase. One of our daughters holds very strong opinions on current matters, and while I can see the point some of the reviewers made (and agree that activists are likely to make their point through more ascetic choices)--nevertheless, this story is your own. I am glad you designed it the way you felt most befitting Hermione and Severus getting married. I liked the solemnity. My only quibble was the choice of a strapless dress being described as "the subject of a Renaissance painting"; while there may have been some shoulder or top of bosom showing, they didn't wear strapless, low-cut back gowns in that period. Still, a good chapter. Thank you for all your work! Author's Response: Thank you for your support. The description you mention was designed as a comment on.the overall classical and pure look Hermione has, rather than comments on fashion. Think of the way the women painted back then where.often given an angelic quality. Author's Response: Thank you for your support. The description you mention was designed as a comment on.the overall classical and pure look Hermione has, rather than comments on fashion. Think of the way the women painted back then where.often given an angelic quality. | |||
| dulcemaria413 | 2011.09.19 - 08:20PM | 1: | Signed |
| What a great story !! Truly Excellent and I love the gentle chemistry that is between them, which I can see growing in to something very extreme. Author's Response: Extreme is.an excellent.word to use, because.they.are.both incredibly headstrong, meaning that while they will eventually share Passion, they are both incredibly stubborn too. Better stop before I give anyway too much! Thanks for the review. | |||
| linn from IA | 2011.09.19 - 01:40PM | 1: | Signed |
| I think you really capture their awkward formality throughout this. It feels right - each wants to do the Right Thing, and yet they're trapped. I like how you use the formal wedding to move them -- Severus's ring, Hermione's song -- closer. Author's Response: Wow! You really for what I was trying to do with this chapter! I needed them to grow closer together, but equally the awkwardness Author's Response: Wow! You really for what I was trying to do with this chapter! I needed them to grow closer together, but equally the awkwardness needed to remain present and apparent. Glad I managed to connect with you about all of that! | |||
| severus49 | 2011.09.19 - 11:56AM | 1: | Signed |
| The wedding was tasteful. You promised it wouldn't be Americanized and you were right. But it still suprised me how very similar British and American weddings are. I laughed at the choice of dresses for the women though - I got married in '97, and the styles were very different than what you've proposed. However, with Wizards and Witches being who they are, I'm sure they can dress however they wanted! After all, Snape's dailywear isn't fashionable for late twentieth century at all! Author's Response: True, the clothing was quite traditional, but that us common for British weddings. I also didn't want it to be too muggle so by adhering to the old fashioned nature of the law and wizarding culture in general I hoped the differences would be obvious enough. | |||
| magicalpresence | 2011.09.19 - 08:11AM | 1: | Signed |
| I liked your descriptions of what Hermione looked like. I agree with you, that even though she's being forced into this, you'd want to make it a gorgeous day. I hope the next part is coming soon! Author's Response: Thank you, inventing her dress took a long time because I wanted.it to be unique and non cliche. The next part should be up at the beginning of next werk | |||
| Sevvy253 | 2011.09.19 - 03:47AM | 1: | Signed |
| LOL @ Snape choosing a Boy George song for his wedding (lucky it wasn't Karma Chameleon!) although I absolutely love the idea that he would be prepared to put so much effort & thought into the whole thing. I have to say your descriptions of the wedding preparations are superb - I could actually see it all happening in front of me &, magical treatment aside, it could have been the build up - with all that entails - to any wedding. And I'm glad Hermione got the romantic event every girl dreams of: It did seem unfair that she should have missed out on that just because the Minstry made the rules of who she should marry. (BTW: - just an aside here - Did you get the e-mail I sent you? Not that I was necessarily expecting a reply, but I was concerned you may not have done as several seem to have gone astray recently. Perhaps you'd just be good enough to let me know some time. Thanks so much!) :-) Author's Response: No I didn't get your email, otherwise I would have definitely replied. I am glad you are enjoying the story so much. The song itself was actually written by Andrew Lloyd Webber for his show Whistle Down the Wind, but Boy George was chosen to sing it on the pop album. YouTube it, it is a beautiful song. But you are right, had severus known about his other music, I doubt he would have picked it LOL | |||
| hermione_narcissa_granger | 2011.09.18 - 10:06PM | 1: | Signed |
| i love this so far it sounds awesome!!! Author's Response: Fantastic to hear! I hope it continues to please you. | |||
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