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sarahdaye92011.09.28 - 05:09PM1: Signed
I'm loving the progression of the relationship! I like that they are both being open and honest and everything with each other. Some people might say it is more realistic for them to fight and bicker and Snape to be an ass all the time because they both have strong personalities, but on the other hand (and what I personally think) they are both super intelligent people who after a short time (like the engagement) of becoming used to things they would realize that getting along with ones spouse is really the only road to contentment or a chance at happiness. Anyways, really like the story and can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Exactly! For me their intelligence wouldn't allow bickering but as you wi see later, take away that rationality and things are no longer so rosy. Hope you continue to read and enjoy!

siage2011.09.28 - 04:50PM1: Signed
Thanks so much for two lovely chapters. All things considered, I'd say they are progressing very well. The song was beautiful. Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: I am so pleased you like the song. I thought it summed up their relationship so perfectly at this stage. Hope you continue to enjoy.

linn from IA2011.09.28 - 11:21AM1: Signed
I do like how you combine their stiffness with each other (and their circumstances) with growing honesty and ease and fun in the lake. And I like that Hermione keeps her respectful behavior that she developed when he was her professor. It really feels that something good is building, but not in a huge silly rush.

Author's Response: I am glad you picked up on the fact that Hermione is still very respectful of Severus since that is very important later on. It is great to know you are enjoying the progression of their relationship so much.

cottontail2011.09.28 - 11:06AM1: Signed
This was my favorite chapter by far. Snape has really allowed Hermione to break down his barriers and even welcomes it. The comfortable silence they share speaks volumes in the relationship already. The scene by the lake was quite beautiful and interesting. As he watches her splash in the water he starts allowing himself the luxury of being able to let down his guard and realize through her innocence that perhaps he can enjoy life. I love the fact that there is so much mutual respect and honesty between them. Her quite understanding of the relationship he had with his father opens her heart to him even more. Physically he is gentle, loving and truly concerned for her and wants her to enjoy and embrace her sexuality. How refreshing it is that he wants her to know pleasure and not shy away from it but to allow her the experience and the sensations of not just sex but what a loving sexual relationship can be. Who knew this man had so much compassion and love to give. Though, he still is the snarky Prof. Snape above all else. We can not lose sight of his sneer and snide remarks. I am looking forward to their complicated relationship and the wanton women he will eventually unleash.

Author's Response: How lovely that you understand the depth I am trying to create. This new private severus is so interesting to write because it makes the future angst much more believable. Can't say anymore now, but I hope you continue to enjoy!

buffyslayer2011.09.28 - 04:15AM1: Signed
She's relaxed rather well into this relationship, and I love duality of Hogwarts Snape/Husband Snape. I don't really think that Hermione would be naive enough to dismiss her bruised body as being normal occurrence of a first time though. Overall, great installment. Cheers!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. The snape duality becomes very important.in chapter 9, which I am currently writing, so I am glad you enjoy it. As for hermione, I take your point, but it was more to display the precarious nature of their communication. You will see why that is.important later! Won't say anymore right now, but continue reading.to find out!

buffyslayer2011.09.28 - 03:50AM1: Signed
Wow, i think i was as nervous as Hermione was during this ordeal.

Author's Response: Yeah, first times are never easy! Glad the tension came across.

Sampdoria2011.09.28 - 03:40AM1: Signed
I think this two last chapters were my over-all favorites in a alreadly very loved story! They migth not love eachother yet, but the respect they have for eachother, the way both of them does their best to build a relationship between husband and wife where trust and loyalty are a fondation, makes this story shine. You portrait them both as as the intelligent adults they are and I love you for it!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I am glad you see the importance of the strong foundation. The angst comes later, which is when this becomes very important. I am glad you are enjoying this story so much.

KellyJoy2011.09.28 - 01:51AM1: Signed
Ooo, this might be my favorite chapter. I loved the lake scene so much. I think Severus needs someone to shine their joy into his life, someone who can find pleasure in the little things. His open appraisal of her and her drenched form was so well written; I felt like I was right inside his head. They’ve already grown significantly more comfortable with each other in a short period of time, which bodes well for their future. Again, their mutual respect shines through, particularly with the mature and frank negotiations of dealing with life back at Hogwarts. And again I like how they’re not letting the ministry dictate the terms of their marriage, that they’re not holding themselves to the once a week mandate for sex, but are following their own feelings. Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Wow, what a compliment, I can't believe you felt like you were inside his head! The development of their feelings for eachother is very hard to write, so I am glad you are.enjoying. long may that continue!

Author's Response: Wow, what a compliment, I can't believe you felt like you were inside his head! The development of their feelings for eachother is very hard to write, so I am glad you are.enjoying. long may that continue!

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